Reviews for Release That Tension
lowi chapter 1 . 6/29/2011

epic, just epic...

The ending was amazing! Well, all of it was!
macdennischardee chapter 1 . 1/13/2011
Yum! X3

So effin hot! ;)

Love the title.. hah.

Last line is the best!
Morghen chapter 1 . 12/1/2010
NonTeddy who? Hahaha, I have to admit I wasn't even thinking about him at all when I was reading this! Thanks for the distraction!


To the story! Wow! Oh my Merlin! Yummy! Hot! Holy Batman! All perfect adjectives and expressions to describe this masterpiece! I love how strong and distinct their personalities are. I felt like you were really able to get deep inside both of their brains and that's really hard to do in a freeverse. The way it started out as bickering and lead to good ol' boys' love was bloody fantastic! Mhmmmm, I would love to read more about these two! Hehe, the lines about who looks like a girl made me laugh a little. I wanna write something from them now!


"I'll stand my ground

get in your face

Because you won't

change me"

I really loved that part. It showed Zach's stubbornness really well and it was worded perfectly.

DistractionPie chapter 1 . 12/1/2010
This was really interesting and a very engaging poem. There was a real sense of feeling in the words. Good work.