|Reviews for Release That Tension|
| lowi chapter 1 . 6/29/2011
epic, just epic...
The ending was amazing! Well, all of it was!
| macdennischardee chapter 1 . 1/13/2011
So effin hot! ;)
Love the title.. hah.
Last line is the best!
| Morghen chapter 1 . 12/1/2010
NonTeddy who? Hahaha, I have to admit I wasn't even thinking about him at all when I was reading this! Thanks for the distraction!
To the story! Wow! Oh my Merlin! Yummy! Hot! Holy Batman! All perfect adjectives and expressions to describe this masterpiece! I love how strong and distinct their personalities are. I felt like you were really able to get deep inside both of their brains and that's really hard to do in a freeverse. The way it started out as bickering and lead to good ol' boys' love was bloody fantastic! Mhmmmm, I would love to read more about these two! Hehe, the lines about who looks like a girl made me laugh a little. I wanna write something from them now!
"I'll stand my ground
get in your face
Because you won't
I really loved that part. It showed Zach's stubbornness really well and it was worded perfectly.
| DistractionPie chapter 1 . 12/1/2010
This was really interesting and a very engaging poem. There was a real sense of feeling in the words. Good work.