Reviews for Devil Arrancar
Guest chapter 1 . 7/19
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Here's the story told how you put it asshole
" one here's Kushina, two here's minato, then they fuck and give baby." I'm also including your grammar just for shits and giggles. Wonderful isn't it? No? Well fuck you.
Guest chapter 1 . 3/15
Yeah make this story go fucking seventy miles a second. Just what all readers look for. That and you need to fix your grammar, the story total is good. But the fuckin story sucks. Kinda missing the days when fan girls never did come here for anything.
Guest chapter 14 . 1/17
That is not an ending you nim rod!M
Primus2021 chapter 2 . 12/8/2015
Team 7: Sensei- Kakashi Hatake. Students- Sasuke Uchiha, Sakura Haruno, and Sai!
Team 8: Sensei- Kurenai Yuhi. Students- Kiba Inuzuka, Shino Aburame, and Ami!
Team 9-continuation
Team 10: Sensei- Asuma Sarutobi. Students- Ino Yamanaka, Choji Akimichi, and Shikamaru Nara!
Team 11: Sensei- Anko Mitarashi. Student/Apprentice- Naruto Uzumaki!

Soooooo, What about Hinata?
Draculalucard chapter 14 . 8/27/2015
please update this is really good
kittycatcacher chapter 14 . 9/18/2014
I really liked this story this far but I'm annoyed that it wasn't completed like the description of the story implied.
Guest chapter 5 . 5/4/2014
Started good, become tooooooooooooooo

good...

compassionate...

TOOOOOOOOO LIGHT SIDED
Guest chapter 3 . 5/4/2014
This is fucking manipulation, Naruto should kill them all, maybe torturing them for a thousand years in the tartarus before they are...

Disposed of spiritually...

Though their souls could be further tortured in Hades ..
Guest chapter 2 . 5/4/2014
Stupid Anko trying to change the perfect Naruto into a fucking brainwashed moron like her!
Oathbreaker3000 chapter 1 . 2/10/2014
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Banjo chapter 9 . 12/10/2013
... What the fuck was with this chapter. You had everyone saying 'in which' every fucking sentence, it's ANNOYING.
Guest chapter 1 . 11/18/2013
I just don't understand how you can fail someone who did perfect on every sing test and then did an A/B ranked (don't really know which) jutsu instead of the the academy E ranked jutsu. Kinda stupid in my opinion, but I understand that this is fanfiction so you, as the author can do whatever you want, even if it makes no sense.
A W chapter 7 . 7/23/2013
Really, he went all out against a, at best, C ranked opponent? One hit would have knocked him out, Sasuke is pathetic. And in canon he couldn't use jutsu or sharingan for that fight.
A W chapter 6 . 7/23/2013
Wow, meaningless demotion? Konoha just can't stop shitting on him. Though, I don't see how they thought this was a good idea, they put Hinata (a genin with no experience) on their team (of A ranked experienced chunin and jounin) for the purpose of getting him to like her, then use her as an excuse to demote him. Changing blame for a moment, you seen to go to unbelievable distances to keep canon, making him fail three times, get special exemption, going to wave, going to the chunin exams etc.
PenNam chapter 14 . 7/22/2013
Um, how is this complete?
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