|Reviews for Marginal Notes|
| ourfrank chapter 1 . 12/2/2010
the whole set-up,everything, genius!
i really loved daphne & astoria in this, and i've never thought this about any fanfic before.
honestly? all i wanted was to join in with bingo.
i might reread with my own home-made bingo cards hahaa.
also , 'Which is why I originally thought they could have come from a sixteen year old girl.' - haha hilarious!
| mariahs.fantasy chapter 1 . 11/30/2010
I loved this story so much, the wittiness that is the bingo squares, everything about this story. Love your work!
| mothlights chapter 1 . 11/30/2010
Thanks for posting this here where I can put it in my favorites!
Love the humor (incl. everything about the bingo cards) little touches (like Slughorn taking credit for Draco's reform) terrific dialog ('Don't lose your head, Daphers, it was pure coincidence. I was hiding from Weasleys, he was hiding from his fan club.' -'Shame. So, date with Hot Justin?'- 'Appointment to discuss Muggle economics in the library.' -'I can't believe there is only one No Fun square for me to cross out.') and behind all the humor, a hint of Draco's resignation to being disliked that gives the whole thing a little weight behind it.
You're particularly good with dialog.
Lastly, I'm sure this is the only place I've seen someone rub his nose eloquently.
| OnlyForMalfoy chapter 1 . 11/30/2010
Amazing story, completely loved it! i really enjoyed your versions of the Greengrass sisters and Myrtle was a lovely sort of voyeur! Thank you very much for writing this!
| honeymufins chapter 1 . 11/30/2010
This is wonderful.
I was delighted to see new story alert by you. You really have become my favorite writer.
I wish you wrote long, complicated, dramatic and overly emotional stories that make even the more senior amongst us blush and swoon. That way I could indulge my somewhat secret love of Harry Potter Slash, whilst also squeeing over your sentence structure and delicious word choices, for a lot longer.
I love your light touch, almost Noel Cowardesque in its clever wit and buoyancy, but I'd love to see you tackle some juicy emotions and character development and ...well..in short, I really just want MORE.
The plot was awfully cute. Draco was quite out of character, but you wrote it so well I was more than willing to suspend disbelief. Harry was adorable, the Greengrass Sisters are warm, wise, witty confidants and your bingo card/story progressing device was a thing of genius.
Can you continue this one...I feel the Bingo cards deserve another chapter at least, if not a brand new story.
So many fave lines to choose from, but I think I will have to go with
"'Really, you're martyr to the needs of the small businessman"
Thanks you for the treat!
| I'm proud of you chapter 1 . 11/29/2010
I really thought that was wonderful. So well-articulated; and it really flowed. Excellent!
| he is the lamb chapter 1 . 11/29/2010
This was brilliant. I love the whole plot behind it. Especially with Draco going around subtlety and not really caring if he changes the way his peers view him. Rather than doing everything outright and taking credit.
My favorite part just might have to be the bingo cards. It makes me want to do that in my own life xD
Favorite line being: "When you look out on the Great Hall, you are seeing all the students you saved."
I do have to comment that I wish there was some sort of line break between all the different scenes, I got a bit mixed up a few times lol.
| moonlightonmalfoymanor chapter 1 . 11/29/2010
I wasn't going to read this because it was late and I need to get up early tomorrow and it was too long but then I saw it was a Blame Brampton and I couldn't help myself and it was fantastic as usual and now it's past midnight and you've reduced me to rambling. Thank you and sweet dreams ;)
| WootYaoi chapter 1 . 11/29/2010
So good. So, so good.
| Puzzle Dragon chapter 1 . 11/29/2010
This was absolutely delightful. - It's one of those fics that just makes you go 'Awwww~3!"
Don't ask how you do the heart in real life. It's a trade secret. w
| don't-want-this-anymore chapter 1 . 11/29/2010
Awwww, that was adorable! I loved it - if only the real thing had been more similar! Thank you very much :)
| Cheekbonesandcoatcollar chapter 1 . 11/29/2010
wow. I genuinly loved this! Very funny and heartwarming too and ight in comparisson to everythign that happened before to the characters. Well done. I hope theres a sequel!
| nairiefairie chapter 1 . 11/29/2010
shall i be blaming brampton for this seriously cute fic? :) simply adorable. it was so sweet. nice piece
| NemoSphinx chapter 1 . 11/29/2010
Just wonderful! :) :)
| HummingbirdsWildHeart chapter 1 . 11/29/2010
I loved this! 3