|Reviews for Together like promised|
| Dragonstar Writes chapter 3 . 5/27/2013
Please please please please pleeeeaaaase update soon! This is a really cool story and I'd like to see it continued somehow!
| Part-Time Reader chapter 3 . 4/18/2013
This kind of reminds me of Anastasia :) Great story! I've always loved backgrounds of royal family with political issues I hope you update soon! XD
| Manami Nightray chapter 3 . 10/20/2012
Great story! I love it! :D
| cookieswithmilktea chapter 3 . 10/2/2011
update! i want to see wat happens next :O
| Unsightlyviewings chapter 3 . 7/1/2011
Please update soon!
| Queen of the Avast Seas chapter 3 . 6/29/2011
Omg i love this story its so well made! Update soon!
| lovelymokona chapter 3 . 5/28/2011
Very well done! I'm looking forward to the next chapter~! Story alert, then? ;)
| Cennis chapter 3 . 5/24/2011
I love the back-and-forth between Oz and Jack. It flowed so naturally and seems how they'd be canonly, y'know, if they spoke without Jack hijacking Oz's body xD
Oz and Ada's reunion was all warm and fuzzy xD Her little flashback and thinking about their games - I can just imagine them playing those sort of games xD From Commander to Captain, looks like Oz gave Ada a promotion for that mission.
And the plot thickens! I'm getting more of an idea of how this story relates to canon while standing on its own as an AU fic. The Vessalius kids are the royal family of Sabrie, but were assassinated (or at least there was an attempt) during an Uprising by the Nightrays/Baskervilles, who have since gained power. Pandora operate to bring justice on those who committed atrocities during the Revolution and to win power back for the Vessalius family. Senpai, awesome~ I'm getting some Russia vibes here and even though Russia and I are having relationship problems right now, I'm loving it xD
Ooh, another cliffy! And this may be the best/worst one yet *0* Gil and Oz reunion! You need to update, Missus, like, yesterday.
| Cennis chapter 2 . 5/24/2011
Nee-chan as in me? *0* Thank you for the dedication!
"Two groups against each other, and the third made of innocent bystanders, who, while not involved in the battle, still took great damage" - Is this fic going to parallel the canon manga? Pandora VS Baskervilles, with the innocent bystanders caught in the middle xD That line got me, since you know how fond I am of fighting in stories.
Ooh, Oz has amnesia :D I wonder if he looks like Jack does, if he's aged during the ten years he was gone (two Jack's, yes please~). I like that even though it's a Gil/Oz fic, Alice and Oz's relationship isn't being undermined; "Oz turned around to find the cute dark haired creature standing behind him" - that is definitely something Oz would think xD
The mention of the Headhunter got me curious xD Is it really just an urban legend~
So confused, I'm getting the feeling from that passage that Alice is a Chain here and Oz is contracted to her. So is the fic semi-AU?
Aw, you've got Ada's little occult obsession in here :D
Jack was so damn suave there, going to the rescue xD I can see that this fic is totally going to cater to my Jack fangirl!
CLIFFHANGER! And you say I'm bad! xDDD Well, I don't have to wait, chapter three, here I come~
| Cennis chapter 1 . 5/24/2011
Hey, Bel! :) Sorry it's taken me so long to get around to reading this. Damn life getting in the way of fics. But here I am, Gil/Oz mode initiated.
Okay, first section and Gil already lost Oz D8 You're crueler than Mochizuki, Senpai! Oz, playing the martyr there, if only Eliot had been there to smack some sense into him xD I really liked how Oz kept telling Gil not to worry, then you said how he looked over his shoulder with worry. Hypocrite xD
Ooh, Jack's in the fic! /squee. So is this an AU fic?
Goddamn, break my heart, why don't you :'( I feel so bad for all three of them, Ada and Jack losing their brother, Gil losing his best friend and left to shoulder the guilt of it. This calls for hugs all round.
One line and you've got Alice's character down pat xD Meat and manservants, that's all it's about for that girl.
It's a very good first chapter, introducing the plot and relations between characters. Now, I'm nitpicking here, but I do have one bit of concrit; the use of Japanese phrases in it. Japanese in fanfics has always been a petpeeve of mine, but I know some people like tossing it in, so I've no problem with that. It's the author's prerogative. But it would be a good idea to have a translation for whatever Japanese words you've used at the bottom, since you can't really assume the reader knows what it means. Me, I only know the honourifics, so I've no idea what Ada and Gil were saying there. I'm assuming she was greeting him?
Anyway, great first chapter :D Onto the second!
| Lazylogin chapter 3 . 5/21/2011
Update soon PLEASE!
| Ebbie54 chapter 3 . 5/18/2011
I loved it! It's seriously great! The cliffy killed me though PLEASE update soon~!
| Starlight-Ninja chapter 3 . 5/13/2011
Yay update! -
Please update again soon; I wanna see if Oz's story is different from cannon or not.
| Felipe Asakura chapter 3 . 5/11/2011
Como ousa terminar em uma parte como essa? T_T Logo agora, quando o Gil e o Oz estavam se reencontrando! Isso é maldade. XD
E gostei da forma que as coisas estão indo na fanfic. o.o Está ficando cada vez mais interessante... XD
PS: Só não gostei das descrições sobre carne, blergh. u.u -apanha
(Ah, e estou comentando os dois capítulos de uma vez porque estou meio atrasado na fanfic. XD Faz tempo que estava querendo ler, mas estava meio desanimado, então fui deixando para depois, mas estou esperando o próximo capítulo. )
| Darkangel78921 chapter 3 . 5/10/2011