Reviews for Curse of the 'Flu
marble-fire chapter 11 . 2/19/2011
cuuuuttteeeee~!
DellaNee-Chan chapter 6 . 12/19/2010
I like the idea... Truly... but it was very choppy, and I found myself lost at certain points... Were you trying to make it so that only the basic facts and said things were known? Because I just feel like you left out information, or they were so vaguely put that they were basically impossible to see if you weren't to read it over... Like when did Kaoru leave with Kyoya at Haruhi's house? i feel like that part was very unnecessary and confusing... But like I said before, it was a nice idea and plot!
Lady Maeror chapter 19 . 12/8/2010
Strange ending chapters, but overall I like the outcome And the bonus chapters were actually good, they weren't OOC or anything. Great story :)

- Mae.
RaInbOw-M0nk3y chapter 16 . 12/7/2010
woohoo~!

i hope kyouya is happy, indeed. :1

gah, i love tragedy-inclined stories. :D

well, i've got nothing to really say so... err...

i like the story, the characters seem very in perspective and there is reason behind events, not just smut. i hope hikaru doesn't end up alone, though... how's about nekozawa? or tamaki? (a little too far fetched, i admit.)

overall, its awesome, i love it and update soon~!

mucho love,

** r. M. **
Lady Maeror chapter 16 . 12/7/2010
Ooh tension.

I don't know, it's just oddly addictive :)

- Mae.
alasfye chapter 14 . 12/6/2010
It's a great job, I want to what coming now
Lady Maeror chapter 14 . 12/6/2010
Lol at drunk Kyoya. Poor Pet Shop dude, must be terrified.
kyleisdabest chapter 13 . 12/6/2010
NOOOOOOOOOOO, no he doesn't, Kyouya fight for your twin! SPINELESS COWARD
TheBlindBandit999 chapter 5 . 12/5/2010
whoa... not what I was expecting...
TheBlindBandit999 chapter 4 . 12/5/2010
I is confused...
TheBlindBandit999 chapter 3 . 12/5/2010
what is kyoya doung there?
TheBlindBandit999 chapter 1 . 12/5/2010
Kaoru barfed EWWWW! nah, but this is good!
yukino-sohma831 chapter 12 . 12/5/2010
just re-read the chapters

funny how a few press of the enter keys makes so much difference

i didnt pick up any changes from the original, so im assuming there's no editing?

anyways, UPDATE!~

PS...just my humble opinion, but maybe make more use of page breaks

cheers~

jenniquack
Lady Maeror chapter 12 . 12/4/2010
I'm warming up to the Kao/Kyo pairing as you go along, and the twin moments are cute, even if angsty. I'm cheering for Hika/Haru as well though xD

Great chapter, love the fast updates :)

- Mae.
jenniquack chapter 1 . 12/4/2010
OMG!

this story that made it into my top 10 all time favourite fanfictions...here on ?

lols, dunno if u know who i am...but assuming that u truly are 'lost_valkirie' from , then maybe u have an inkling of who i might be...

anyways, awesome that ur posting this fic here on (assuming u r the original writer )

anyways, i already left a review on mminer, but just wanted to pay a tribute to the version

cheerios~
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