Reviews for One Hell of a Surprise
dawn.schlimpf chapter 18 . 5/7/2013
i really hope u write more i would love to know how things turn out
Babysis64 chapter 11 . 4/27/2013
oh wow i think the two vampire men got their punishment and just wow now they have to watch Bella pleasure her self and they can't do that way to go Bella.
Babysis64 chapter 10 . 4/27/2013
oh wow i think Jasper is in trouble cool and i hope that she can get through to Jasper and wow she used his whole name.
Babysis64 chapter 8 . 4/27/2013
well why can't Bella do that too refuse to give head and she can just have luke warm showers right. So i guess Bella is finished with school then for them to be going to Texas and that is mean if Bella can't have a life like to learn for herself i think.
Babysis64 chapter 7 . 4/27/2013
Oh no and wow that is sad that Bella can't do her own thing to get her out of her clumsy state that is all she wants to do plus learn to protect herself hopefully she doesn't get into too much crap for wanting to learn these things right.
Mist17 chapter 18 . 1/20/2013
Babysis64 chapter 18 . 8/29/2012
very good story thank you for sharing it i enjoyed it too bad the family broke apart because of what Alice and Carlisle did to use the imprint
Babysis64 chapter 15 . 8/29/2012
why would the Volturri want to fight the Cullen's and the Whitlocks this isn't good now is it no but hopefully they can pull through and win all of the fights they will have to get people to stand with them i think
Babysis64 chapter 14 . 8/29/2012
just wow Bella is a sponge that is cool so she is going to be a tough vampire that is just so cool and how did Peter know what gift she had that was cool also i think.
Babysis64 chapter 13 . 8/29/2012
wow Bella is awake already that is impossible isn't it for just a few hours if that
Babysis64 chapter 12 . 8/29/2012
wow the three of Maria's people helped Bella that was nice as long as she saved them from the god of war and the captain cause they would cause pain and a lot of it
Babysis64 chapter 9 . 8/29/2012
wow so Peter claimed Bella just for Jasper now huh this is going to be interesting to say don't you think i do just wow she has two hunky mates way to go Bella
Babysis64 chapter 6 . 8/29/2012
like i said before he deserved everything he got and more plus he was cheating on Bella so who was the whore not Bella she didn't sleep around now did she no
Babysis64 chapter 5 . 8/29/2012
well Edward got what was coming to him just because Bella didn't play the way he wanted her to doesn't mean he gets to demean her in any way and to break her arms just because she didn't want to do what he wanted her to do was dumb in my eyes like i said Edward got what he deserved
Babysis64 chapter 3 . 8/29/2012
So Alice seen this and her soul mate i wonder if she saw Edwards i wonder if it is Tanya lol now that would be funny now wouldn't it cause they call each other cousins of sorts right but now that Bella has her two mates she should be happy.
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