Reviews for Hans Gruber Story: Who am I
Joseph chapter 1 . 3/5/2011
Excellent! I really liked it! You have come sooo far since your earlier work ( won't mention that family's name in case you want to do it later but it began with a S... ). I really

felt like I was there but why leave us hanging? What happened to this guy? We really want to know? How did Hans survive that fall at the end of Die Hard? Who were some of these other guys in the prison? What was that place and what were they injecting into the prisoners? How did he exscape did they just let him go?

You have an excellent opening, but please don't leave us hanging! Otherwise, excellent!
eradicatedplane chapter 1 . 12/10/2010
I think you should be more descriptive. I also think you could have come up with an interesting way to let the reader know who you are in the first person point of view. If it is fan fiction that is.
listen2acoustic chapter 1 . 11/29/2010
You have to put the next part up SOON. I like all the suspense thing, and the way you keep the sentences short just makes me want to read more. Next part PLEASE! :D