|Reviews for A Player to be Named Later|
| Alby Mangroves chapter 14 . 2/21/2011
WOOT! A perfect ending to a lovely love story. This was great: "She caught Kate's teasing smile as she disappeared. They probably looked a little ridiculous out here, running up and down the length of the backyard, teasing and flirting and making all kinds of noise. But her heart was full and she was happy and she could tell by the wide grin on Emmett's face that he was, too. Not much else mattered." I love that they got the play like this, and keep the tradition alive for Emmett's grandpa. Gorgeous x
| McGee42 chapter 14 . 2/21/2011
Happy sigh. Thank you so much for this.
| LittleLea05 chapter 13 . 2/20/2011
I am so proud of Alice for buying her own condo and screwdriver :)
And Emmett at the batting cages :) so hot and I'm so glad he stopped overthinking about the Rose/Lily thing
Can't wait to read the epilogue and we will talk soon :)
| xxluvCarlisleEsmexx chapter 13 . 2/20/2011
I loved both chapters. I was afraid for a moment that Em would freak out and do something stupid. I'm glad he was able to step back and realize that it wasn't a bad thing for himself to be that open with one person...that Rose was just as open with him. They were both able to see the good and bad in each other and still want the other. That is what makes a good relationship. I can't believe it's almost over. It's so sad
| Lady Dragona chapter 13 . 2/19/2011
I love how Alice's victory brought Emmett what he needed to finally decided he could just roll with his relationship with Rose.
| saranic chapter 13 . 2/19/2011
Awwww, I knew you two would have it worked out perfectly.
I like how he had faults, just like everyone else.
I'm gonna miss them and you two writing together. It always flows so smoothly when you pair up.
Looking forward to the epi, but sad it is done.
| bmango chapter 13 . 2/19/2011
And copied from H's.
Wow. Nice save Em and completely awesome in the context of the story. I like how you brought it back to their first meeting and the movie and baseball analogies were flawless. And I'm glad you didn't draw it out - that they came back together and worked things out. Thanks for sharing this lovely ride and I'm sad to see them go. -b
| bmango chapter 12 . 2/19/2011
Ahh, so she did put it together. Smart girl... And ARGH! I'm so so so glad that I have that little "next" button there... I had a feeling Em might freak out a little, but a few days? No, my man, don't do this to her. Or yourself. Sad panda... Ok, clicking away. -b
| bmango chapter 11 . 2/19/2011
Yay for realizations and confessions and finally getting to home... :)
I love this line: "She didn't try to fix him or placate him, and by doing so, she simply made him better, something no one else had ever had the time or the power to do." It's sort of what I was trying to say last chapter - that she just let him be him. And that's the best part of everything.
So...he mentioned Whitman and Neruda there at the end...did Rose pick up on it? Will Lily and Mac meet? So curious. Oh! And look! Another chapter! :) -b
| bmango chapter 10 . 2/18/2011
Copied this from H's...
I love that Emmett was able to open up so much to Rose (that he allowed himself to say something to anyone) and that she was able to just listen and be there for him, to be someone he could lean on... And, jesus, the UST is killing me, but I love the way it's playing out. Great chapter! -b
| mycrookedsmile chapter 13 . 2/18/2011
( ( ( Emmett) ) ) I'm just glad he figured it out quickly. Loved the interaction btwn siblings, and as always love the ruminations on baseball and life.
I was surprised that Rose seemed so nervous (for lack of a better word) when she met him- I'd have thought that his message to Lily would have set her at ease as far as his decision went, but I guess, like Em, she was protecting her heart.
| RJRRAA chapter 13 . 2/18/2011
LOVED IT SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO MUCH, PLZ PLZ PLZ WRITE SOON.
| Alby Mangroves chapter 13 . 2/18/2011
*sigh* This whole chapter was perfect. I loved this: "It wasn't until their second drink that they even touched, and that was as simple as holding hands." I can see them sitting there, talking about their lives... only the epi left? *sad panda*
| Alby Mangroves chapter 12 . 2/18/2011
GAH THIS "After reading the message again, Rosalie picked up her phone and went to her recent calls, staring at Emmett's name. It was right at the top. She wanted to call him and tell him what she'd discovered, that out of all the people in this city – god, the world – they'd found each other not once but twice. How, despite the fact that this was crazy and weird and a little scary, it was also amazing."
And the WAAAH Emmett, how could you! Get your shit together and chase after her! *hearts* ladies, Love your work x
| Alby Mangroves chapter 11 . 2/18/2011
Oh my goodness... I had the updates in my Inbox while madly trying to complete my outtake for Fandoms Fight the Floods on time, and they sat there unassuming this whole time including their first time! Aww, it was gorgeous! I love how you romance them without the obvious smut, it's so sexy! And I loved that she took the reigns. Lovely chapter!