|Reviews for One Minute in the Mind of Lucrecia|
| fakedoctor chapter 1 . 7/4/2011
I'm sensing some "holden caufild" self-contradiction. you've created a "playback loop" in your thinking (austin powers fat bastard "I eat because im unhappy and im unhappy because i eat")
Your cycle is about sabotaging your own chance's for happiness, pushing away and mocking the people who you seem to suggest are every bit as fucked up as you are, i know, i've been commited twice for atempting suicide. There likely is no 'chain-of-reasoning' someone propose that would convince you to allow yourself to be happy, you've already made up your mind to be miserable, either because you dont feel you deserve it, need it, want it, etc. If you havent, i highly suggest reading 'catcher in the rye', an absolute must read for anyone who feels disjointed with reality or society.
| ForsakenRealms chapter 1 . 12/18/2010
Hm, very well written and a different approach of Lucrecia. It seemed different, but again i've built a different image in my mind