|Reviews for Ice crystals|
| Joel-Gomes chapter 1 . 9/22/2013
A story starring Annie Raines... I don't think I've ever read one of those before. Why is that? It can't be because we know so little about her. If it were, we would almost never have written stories with Faith, Margaret, Emily, Gemini, etc. etc. With Mr. Raines as a father, Miss Parker and Lyle as half-siblings, plus being captured by Douglas Willard, the possibilities in terms of plot are endless.
So, first of all, I must congratulate you for choosing to write for this character. I don't know if you're the first who does but you're the first that I read. Second, this is a very good piece, although it feels somewhat short or, as someone else put, this " is a wonderful beginning to a really good story."
It really is. Go write it for us.
| CriminalMinds4Life chapter 1 . 11/29/2010
The story is a wonderful beginning to a really good story. You should really add on to it!