|Reviews for Coming Undone|
| The-KLF chapter 1 . 1/22/2014
This is so sweet. I would've loved a scene like this in season 3!
| RGoodfellow64 chapter 1 . 4/29/2013
Holy cow! I am so glad I check out the favorite stories of people who like mine, because I find gems like this that were written before I joined FF. This was an amazingly emotional piece.
| jennifergarnerfan chapter 1 . 1/15/2012
Pretty. I think this is such a great fic. awesome
| hardly loquacious chapter 2 . 1/19/2011
I like this. Especially the last few lines of the first chapter. It's more depressing than I usually like my Castle!fic, but it's well done. Nice job.
| Kerika chapter 2 . 1/15/2011
i want a third chapter!
| Xleste chapter 2 . 12/24/2010
First, I'm thoroughly enjoying your writing style. It's descriptive and evocative and engrossing. Second, I love the way this plot played out! Thank you, and happy holidays! :)
| recycled-stars chapter 1 . 12/23/2010
Gina and Castle? Totally calling it quits before Beckett and Josh. I'd put money on it. (You're always a little less willing to wait it out on Relationship: Round Two. It's new for Beckett and Josh, they've got time to get there.)
Secondly, I might cry. Honestly. This was so wonderfuly descriptive and I sort of always love comforting!Castle and Beckett's last line? Perfect. I really liked this.
| Stef chapter 1 . 12/11/2010
Wow, I got teary eyed at the end. SO, so beautifully written. Thank u so much for sharing!
| Syd15 chapter 2 . 12/7/2010
Just came across this and I gotta say that it is fantastic.
Your writing is escellent and you've got the characters spot on!
| gracie127 chapter 2 . 12/7/2010
Heavy but in a good way
| rkcaskett chapter 2 . 12/7/2010
Great chapters; I hope you continue.
| BURN3 chapter 2 . 12/5/2010
Excellent story. I would love to read a sequel to this story. I didn't care for your ending this chapter in Josh's POV though. I just don't care what that 'place holder' thinks about, well...pretty much anything really. Anyway, thank you for sharing your story.
| AllusionToAnIllusion chapter 2 . 12/5/2010
I am actually in love with your writing style. It's beautiful and descriptive in a very simple way. I'm kind of amazed by it. I'm so ecstatic that she went with him but that she realizes that she's leaving something behind too. A lot of people would say that Josh is just compensation because she can't have Castle but I don't think that's completely true. I love the italicized sentences the most, it describes her pain so well. It's never going to fully heal and it plagues her in different ways. I could point out all of the things I love but it would take a longer amount of time than I have to write this review. All in all, beautiful and very well done. I'm definitely voting for a third part.
| I'm Widget chapter 2 . 12/5/2010
I'm so glad she chose to go with Rick.
| AllusionToAnIllusion chapter 1 . 12/1/2010
I absolutely love this. It's great, it really is. I can feel the emotions just flying out of my computer screen. Wonderful piece. And I definitely wouldn't be opposed to another installment. But this is powerful enough to stand on its own so it would be great either way. Good job on this one.