Reviews for Harry Potter and the Temporal Beacon |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Great story. Very intriguing plot. Thank you for writing this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow! This is amazing and nakes ny brain double time to keep up. Waiting patiently. |
![]() ![]() ![]() why you felt the need to change that vision is fucking bizarre. no one acts like humans in this fic, everyone always sounds like their shouting everything's info dumped |
![]() ![]() At this point, it would be a boon if the newest defense professor is just someone possessed by Voldemort. If he's an unspeakable, then that has a lot more severe complications, as that would mean they have also managed to come back without creating their own signal sending beacon which opens up a whole other can of worms. |
![]() ![]() This was really good but there were quite some inconsistencies. In the latest loop, why didn't they remember about Inferi when they had proper notes about the ring and locket by the cursebreakers from the last time loop? They only used the notes for the ring and not for the locket? |
![]() ![]() What about Sirius? I feel a little bit confused that Harry still doesn't think about him. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow this story has been amazing! I notice you haven't updated since 2013 - 10 years ago...so I guess this is abandoned. Too bad, it was really incredible! |
![]() ![]() I stopped at chapter 11, What is the use of their knowledge if they do not use it, he always forgets the things he learned about occlumency which should help them better organize their memories. This trip was useless, they did nothing to change or evolve, when the charm professor asked him about these unusual dueling skills, he had the chance to have free lessons to improve, He did not train at all in defense, He is not looking to collect Horcruxes, à oublier à propos du tournament and therefore would have had to be prepared for because he had already known for the first chapter , he didn't do that shit, let Dumbledore know for the card and therefore give him the possibility to monitor them now and manufacture his, even Harry canon will not let it happen. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sad that there's not more... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good chapter, especially like the end part. Good on the Author |
![]() ![]() I am assuming the original timeline went on as their memories were sent to an alternate reality that follows the original timeline until the beacon was created with variable prophecies |
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