Reviews for Harry Potter and the Temporal Beacon
LAB1 chapter 70 . 7/13/2021
So every time they go back they have never gotten as close to winning as in canon. They don't know all the horcruxes locations. While your tournament is vastly superior, it never makes sense why things get so much more difficult. You've gone over and over the same time period so many times. It would be nice to have final closure, but it is hard to keep invested.
zachariahm chapter 52 . 7/6/2021
Back on track, the twins being the reason for Harry in the tournament is genius.
zachariahm chapter 39 . 7/6/2021
Wow, this turned terrible pretty quick.
zachariahm chapter 36 . 7/6/2021
I have a hard time believing Dumbledore would go this far without actually being evil, honestly.
wujuninja chapter 70 . 6/24/2021
please write more
Guest chapter 6 . 5/19/2021
The idea here is great, and some of the execution of it is solid. The characterizations, unfortunately, are pretty bad. I'm going to try to keep reading it. Thanks for sharing.
muffdyvr chapter 57 . 5/6/2021
what a loser!
how exactly is loser supposed to defeat a dark lord?
muffdyvr chapter 51 . 5/6/2021
are you eastern europian?
cause your suckin all over durmstangs dick.
if they are so bad ass, why was karkaroff the only death eater?
muffdyvr chapter 39 . 5/5/2021
i retract my previous statement...
this story went to shit!
muffdyvr chapter 1 . 5/5/2021
this fic would be awsome if it wasn't for a weak ass harry.
AARON MCNATT chapter 70 . 4/29/2021
Ahhh I just found this story an spent two weeks marathoning though it please either come back to it or at least do a summary of how it ends or something.
Guest chapter 26 . 4/26/2021
YOU DID IT AGAIN
Guest chapter 25 . 4/26/2021
I use that joke all the time (The SERIOUS and SIRIUS) against my friend, a bit too often.
Guest chapter 24 . 4/26/2021
Yay! Snape bashing! I love strawberries
Guest chapter 14 . 4/25/2021
Oh my. I'm so sorry. Maybe they should have given you more anesthetics?
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