Reviews for Harry Potter and the Temporal Beacon |
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![]() ![]() ![]() So every time they go back they have never gotten as close to winning as in canon. They don't know all the horcruxes locations. While your tournament is vastly superior, it never makes sense why things get so much more difficult. You've gone over and over the same time period so many times. It would be nice to have final closure, but it is hard to keep invested. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Back on track, the twins being the reason for Harry in the tournament is genius. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, this turned terrible pretty quick. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I have a hard time believing Dumbledore would go this far without actually being evil, honestly. |
![]() ![]() ![]() please write more |
![]() ![]() The idea here is great, and some of the execution of it is solid. The characterizations, unfortunately, are pretty bad. I'm going to try to keep reading it. Thanks for sharing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() what a loser! how exactly is loser supposed to defeat a dark lord? |
![]() ![]() ![]() are you eastern europian? cause your suckin all over durmstangs dick. if they are so bad ass, why was karkaroff the only death eater? |
![]() ![]() ![]() i retract my previous statement... this story went to shit! |
![]() ![]() ![]() this fic would be awsome if it wasn't for a weak ass harry. |
![]() ![]() Ahhh I just found this story an spent two weeks marathoning though it please either come back to it or at least do a summary of how it ends or something. |
![]() ![]() YOU DID IT AGAIN |
![]() ![]() I use that joke all the time (The SERIOUS and SIRIUS) against my friend, a bit too often. |
![]() ![]() Yay! Snape bashing! I love strawberries |
![]() ![]() Oh my. I'm so sorry. Maybe they should have given you more anesthetics? |