Reviews for Stars
Italian Guest chapter 23 . 9/7/2015
Hi! I really like your story.
As a fan of Esme and Carlisle I was so happy to find out that someone decided to rewrite the books from their point of view.
Just one thing: in chapter 23 the translation of Carlisle's speech on the phone is wrong.
The correct translation of: "I must speak with Aro. Please let me speak to him. No, don't do that!" in italian is "Devo parlare con Aro. Per favore, fatemi parlare con lui. No, non lo faccia".
It's not a big deal, I know that our country is not one of the biggest and we didn't have colonies so not a lot of people know our language, but if you want to correct that you'll make a fan very happy.
Thank you for writing such a beautiful story.
Newfi Girl chapter 87 . 1/11/2015
This has been an absolute joy to read. You captured Esme and Carlisle perfectly, along with the rest of the characters. Thank you so much for writing this and definitely keep it up, you have a great talent. :)
Purradox chapter 87 . 4/27/2014
Enjoyed this so much. Thank you for writing this. You did a great job.
Purradox chapter 86 . 4/27/2014
Totally adorable moments between c/t and c/e. Well done.
Purradox chapter 85 . 4/27/2014
Awwww! Sexy Carlisle is always good
Purradox chapter 84 . 2/24/2014
With Alice's whimper was that in the book or your creation? Don't make me go back and look. LOL.
Purradox chapter 83 . 2/24/2014
Well done. I've always thought Carlisles thoughts would've been a bit harsher toward aro as more of the deception was revealed.
GrimFWaters chapter 50 . 1/21/2014
:( I hate the killing of babies, but I think you did an excellent job of writing from Carlisle's perspective.
Purradox chapter 82 . 1/20/2014
Garrett was so right it wasn't even funny!
Purradox chapter 81 . 1/20/2014
That was by far one of the saddest moments. Well done.
GrimFWaters chapter 23 . 1/20/2014
Purradox chapter 79 . 12/22/2013
Go ahead Mama bear Esme!
Very good dissection of the scenes.
Purradox chapter 78 . 12/22/2013
Thanks for the shout out. Happy to still be apart of things. This chapter had to have been a tug of war with emotions from esme. Well done.
Purradox chapter 77 . 12/19/2013
This major scene always viewed from Bella's perspective should've been seen from Carlisles or esmes. They were the ones more deeply touched. Well done.
Purradox chapter 76 . 12/19/2013
Poor Carlisle. I was kinda feeling the Romanians a little bit during the books and movies. I would have wanted some payback too.
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