Reviews for My kidnaper, My master
deideiblueeyez chapter 1 . 8/20/2012
It's good but the authors comments were a little distracting. Try to keep them either at the beginning or the end of the story or chapter.. otherwise good story :D.. oh, a few spelling errors too "read heard".. "red head"? ...merf?
jisko2ijsko chapter 1 . 6/9/2012



ssad thing it is just a one-shot TT_TT

KurohimeHitsugaya chapter 2 . 6/9/2012
I sign on too
MidnightShadows184 chapter 1 . 4/9/2012
i loooooooooved it! It was awsome for your first lemon oneshot!

keep writing!
AkastukiDragon chapter 1 . 8/11/2011
I love this story very nicely done
Naru 606 chapter 1 . 8/7/2011
Awesome, is so cute write more
Wolven-1 chapter 1 . 3/30/2011
That was really good! i liked it! A LOT!

One thing... in the last paragraph you repeat the word 'Trust' instead of Thrust. :P
hollysky chapter 1 . 3/13/2011
*nosebleeds* Yaoi smexines... That was interesting! XD
Tunnel for Puppies chapter 1 . 1/27/2011
Hehehehehehehe have you ever thought about adding a second chapter onto this? You know, like a 'What happened the morning after' chapter. I loved it! chapter 1 . 1/8/2011
sooo gooooooooooood

kariuchiha19 chapter 1 . 12/9/2010
nice!the A/n notes made me laugh!XDD
Silverstonedragon chapter 1 . 12/7/2010
good story.
Dreams of Shadows chapter 1 . 12/1/2010
awesomeness i hope you will update the other stories soon. Pwease! :3
XxMadaraUchihaxX chapter 1 . 11/30/2010
*noes bleed* umm...w-well now...that was...umm...*wipes nose*

AWESOME~~~~! *SUPER GLOMPS YOU* and don't worry I'm starting to type up your story..X33 it should be done within the next few weeks...
pastelstripes chapter 1 . 11/30/2010
Haha! "Sex?" "No." Haha! :D I never really understood why people don't just say 'gender' _ Nicely done.

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