Reviews for The Enthrallment Variable
Halfred Askold chapter 16 . 4/8/2012
You have a gift for writing dialogue.

Rate: A
Halfred Askold chapter 15 . 4/8/2012
Good chapter.

Rate: A
Halfred Askold chapter 14 . 4/8/2012
Left out a word, but good scene.

Rate: A-
Halfred Askold chapter 13 . 4/8/2012
Ok I didn't see that last part coming... and that was good

Rate: A
Halfred Askold chapter 12 . 4/8/2012
Ok... GOOD CHAPTER

Rate: A
Halfred Askold chapter 11 . 4/8/2012
Interesting

Rate: A
Halfred Askold chapter 10 . 4/8/2012
Interesting.

Rate: A-
Halfred Askold chapter 9 . 4/8/2012
Ok, the moonshine and the Girl Scout cookies were good.

Rate: A
Halfred Askold chapter 8 . 4/8/2012
Ok, fun girl talk.

Rate: A
Halfred Askold chapter 7 . 4/8/2012
Hmmmm

Rate: B
Halfred Askold chapter 6 . 4/8/2012
Hmmmmmm

Interesting Katrina insert.

Nice

Rate: A
Halfred Askold chapter 5 . 4/8/2012
Ok the dialogue was a little confusing at times. You need more description. Not just talk.

Interesting turn of events. Penny doesn't like thinking of Sheldon with someone else. Who is as pretty as she is.

Rate: B
Halfred Askold chapter 4 . 4/8/2012
Ok, we can start to see the misgivings in Penny's eyes when she sees someone else with Sheldon.

Rate: A
Halfred Askold chapter 3 . 4/8/2012
wow... I see it. Leonard is wanting Reg...

ok, that works...

Rate: A for including so many others from TBBT
Halfred Askold chapter 2 . 4/8/2012
Oh Penny. You just don't know do you...?

Rate: A
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