Reviews for Light and Dark
QixJ chapter 4 . 4/11
your story is just a run on, this chapter you just told people that she became full demon. I love the story and where you're going but I also think you should rewrite it and give more story to said story.
BlackMagicRose7 chapter 4 . 12/3/2014
Aw, this was a sweet short story. I'm glad I was able to reread it.
amanda chapter 4 . 7/17/2014
The whole story was really very cool n I am surprised that no one realized she was with child but I plover it gud job
My Hopes and Dreams chapter 4 . 6/7/2014
That was very interesting.
banannacreamhead chapter 3 . 1/8/2014
you look like a man
aunanamissperiso chapter 3 . 1/8/2014
you got a fat foehead
rdarkangel003 chapter 4 . 11/29/2013
Thank was such a good story!
lara5170 chapter 3 . 10/7/2013
I just reread this story, I enjoyed it but wish it was longer. I also wish there was more info regarding the twins (their powers) & Kagome's changes; when they happened, how they happened (etc.) & what happened to the well.
Yamama chapter 4 . 8/17/2013
Really nice story
Guest chapter 4 . 6/6/2013
Holy FUCK! I love it and you! Please make more like ties. I find it very enjoyabol
CupaTheCreeper268 chapter 4 . 5/9/2013
SOO short D: can make another session/kag story xD
munford chapter 4 . 3/10/2013
awww how sweet happy ending for something that started out as rape
emeliekiki chapter 1 . 2/14/2013
loved it!
malika chapter 4 . 9/25/2012
dang i am jealous of your writing skills your good. I love this story
Anon chapter 3 . 8/14/2012
You need to lengthen your scenes, be more descriptive & constructive. Have paragraphs not one big blob. Things are moving way too quickly. There's no time to vision anything. What's the rush? Use quotationmarks when characters are speaking. Your writing style needs work.
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