Reviews for 9: Coming to an End
Tikatu chapter 6 . 12/5/2010
Been reading along, Cath, and enjoying every chapter so far. (Can't believe you haven't been reviewed yet!). Interesting idea of Grant's, trying to make it look like Mark was still with the team. He should have predicted the outcome of that little scheme. I agree wholeheartedly with Jason and Rick: Mark is and always will be the Eagle.

I really like the way you've built up the other characters in your series - like Rick. Your steady introduction of these OCs have made it far easier to see them as an integral part of the story and not just someone thrown in.

One little bobble you might want to correct: "Rick stepped away from the table blinding your superiors wasn't considered polite..." I think you need "as" or a semi-colon after "table". Other than that, a pleasure to read, as always.

Looking forward to the next chapter.