Reviews for Criminality
l'inconnue chapter 1 . 5/19
this was a delight from start to finish, it hit so many good outsider pov beats - rumours ("ralphie fisher said"), mistaking a wand for a gun, and that twist at the end... what a good fic
Murkatroyd chapter 1 . 4/18
This could fit right neatly into canon as we know it. It's nice, well-written, and only as long as it needs to be. I'm glad I've read it. Well done.
SmilingRoses chapter 1 . 1/14
I'm so glad I came across this fic! This was great, would love to read more like this! Thanks for sharing your writing with us :)
Guest chapter 1 . 8/31/2017
Sweet little fic.
darklightuk chapter 1 . 6/21/2017
Short and direct.
A nice and surprising read on a Wednesday afternoon. I don't typically post on FF but just felt you should have some thanks for the story here. Would love to see something more from you, but thats your choice.
purpleradiance chapter 1 . 2/5/2017
Loved it!
LittleMissInsomnia chapter 1 . 8/25/2016
I really liked this story! You should do a sequel - with Andrew getting his letter, then meeting Harry at Hogwarts or somethin'. :)
A.Tigerose chapter 1 . 7/11/2016
sequel? really good i want to know more
ME chapter 1 . 6/23/2016
So Andrew's a wizard! That's cool!
May Eve chapter 1 . 1/10/2016
*screeches because yes please fantastic thank you*
Mysteryfan17 chapter 1 . 8/11/2015
Aaaaawwww, future wizard, cute, 10/10
Writer's-BlockDP chapter 1 . 7/20/2015
Haha now here's an OC that I wouldn't mind seeing again! I'm currently picturing the look on poor Andrew's face if/when he arrives at Hogwarts and puts it all together, and I'm laughing just thinking about it. Love the glimpse at the neighborhood drama!
treena-ivy-carter chapter 1 . 7/1/2015
Technically speaking, Harry did burn a possessed teacher alive with his bare hands but it was self-defense. . .

I liked this story. I like the concept of Harry intervening on Dudley's gang and saving someone and then being thought of as a criminal. Thank you for writing.

AmericanMuggleborn chapter 1 . 6/24/2015
I read a very similar story but this one is better.
Darwin's Apprentice chapter 1 . 4/18/2015
Pleade make a sequel with a mentor!harry
95 | Page 1 2 3 4 .. Last Next »