Reviews for Criminality
Guest chapter 1 . 2/18
Andrew’s a wizard! (I think)
MuggleMeatloaf chapter 1 . 3/31/2023
love this! this story was really good!
Arrowkid21 chapter 1 . 2/5/2022
This deserves a second chapter! Very good.
Ruki88 chapter 1 . 12/25/2021
This really deserved a 2nd part with Andrew going to Hogwarts and finding who Harry Potter is. Man, it would'vd been glorious.
mcepl chapter 1 . 8/6/2021
Looks very good. I would include the Dementors’ attack somehow, but perhaps it would make things too complicated.
Yukino-chan chapter 1 . 5/8/2021
Love it!
MPRose chapter 1 . 2/17/2021
The friendly neighbourhood wizard!
The Sky At Midnight chapter 1 . 12/12/2020
This was so good! I really liked the twist(kind of) at the end. The outsider POV was just brilliant. Nicely done.
Saetbyeol chapter 1 . 7/25/2020
This was very fun to read! Though I wish that there was more chapters outlining how Andrew got his Hogwarts letter and finding Harry at Hogwarts too...
silvaliana23 chapter 1 . 2/29/2020
I am loving this so far I am hopping you can add a chapter,i wanna see when he gets his letter at hogwarts and when he sees Harry there too. I was also hopping they can become friends after coming back in would be a great u update soon.
MissBrunetteBarbie chapter 1 . 2/15/2020
I love outsider's POV and this was simoly ohenomenal. Thank you for such a great fic
Grumpr chapter 1 . 1/6/2020
Love this! It's really cool to get an outsider's pov on Harry (and a Muggle too) and I absolutely love how Andrew is probably a wizard too, even if he doesn't know it yet. Perhaps in a few years he'll have a story to tell about Harry Potter saving him from bullies! Thanks for writing and sharing! :)
siobhan.22 chapter 1 . 12/26/2018
Great story
YaoiHellian chapter 1 . 9/4/2018
Cute, simply, and makes you want to read more. Nice story hun, thank you for writing.
l'inconnue chapter 1 . 5/19/2018
this was a delight from start to finish, it hit so many good outsider pov beats - rumours ("ralphie fisher said"), mistaking a wand for a gun, and that twist at the end... what a good fic
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