Reviews for Second Chances
KiraJenLove chapter 1 . 11/11/2012
To answer my anonymous guest (who cannot otherwise be contacted) - As my name implies, I had already exhausted the same old kinds of "Jen-and-Kira-in-love" fluff that everyone else has written that I wanted to get off my chest. After that, I decided to take it in a different, darker direction. A kind of "what-if" situation, and there is nothing wrong with exploring "what-ifs". It's not like I'm writing the screenplay for the next movie. There is also nothing wrong with OC's. If you are incapable of creating an OC, then you will be forever stuck with only canonical characters to work with. Surely there is more to Thra than just Jen and Kira.
Guest chapter 1 . 11/11/2012
KiraJenLove... once again someone names themselves after their so-called favorite couple… do they live up to it? No! What do they do instead? They just come up with an OC… the first sign that you have no talent in writing once you resort to this
Guest chapter 7 . 11/11/2012
What a sorry ass excuse for coming up with an OC Mary Sue… by killing off Kira… your no Jen/Kira fan… far from it
MasterTerrwyn93 chapter 7 . 5/9/2011
A sad take on the story but it's very good :)
Lord of Altair chapter 7 . 12/6/2010
Nice story. A very interesting alternate ending to "The Dark Crystal". I like it, please continue.