|Reviews for Syphon|
| Rayehamato chapter 8 . 12/9/2011
This was a very awesome story. I wish you had finished it. Great job!
| Vivid Imaginest chapter 8 . 3/26/2011
So Metro Man CAN feel pain. Interesting. Wonder what he's going to do to her now that she's at his mercy? I'd call Megamind and have him zap her, or fly off and get his De-gun and do it myself. But that's me. My question is, what will YOU do?
Loving it so far! Please update soon!
| Viv Slvrdreamer chapter 8 . 3/19/2011
wow he did exackly what she wanted and all she had to do was fall asleep. he really isnt much of a thinker is he
great chapter cant wait for the next one
| LittleLoki18 chapter 1 . 3/18/2011
| PrayerGirl chapter 8 . 3/15/2011
Daaaang! Metro's Stupid.
| spookysister7 chapter 7 . 3/8/2011
| PrayerGirl chapter 7 . 3/3/2011
I disagree with you, I like seeing these kinds of chapters! :D They don't have to be action packed. Infact if you had just action, they story wouldn't be as good! ;)
Anyway onto the chapter. I loved it! It was so cute and I don't mind at all reading chapters like these everyday! And I'm not just saying that. I really do love fluff! XD
| Viv Slvrdreamer chapter 7 . 3/3/2011
Great chapter it was cute even if it is filler. Tee hee Roxanne sent Megamind's mind to naughty land. Where boys go to play in there imaginations. XD
| AlphaCentari1027 chapter 6 . 1/16/2011
Originally I thought your story had a lot of potential, but these last two chapters...they don't seem to contribute much in moving the plot forward.
End of chapter V, basically we're back at chapter II with Syphon trying to figure how and if she can use Metro Man for her own purposes.
| b7-kerravon chapter 6 . 1/12/2011
OK, I'm sorry, but I didn't follow that? When exactly did Megamind beat Syphon? Last I knew, Syphon was having a 'sit-in' with Music Man, waiting to steal his powers? I've gone through the other 5 chapters again, and can't seem to find the final battle? Am I missing something? Did ffnet not show me all of chapter 5?
Other than being confused with this last chapter, I have LOVED this story. I was afraid it was going to be a Mary Sue, but it sooooo isn't! Your OC is nice and menacing, and makes a great villain! Keep up the good work (and tell me which chapter the battle is in - maybe I need to re-log onto ffnet and see if that fixes it)
| Phantom77 chapter 6 . 1/11/2011
I'm with Minion. Awwwww! Love the whole 'trust in you' scene. It was cute as well as Megamind's belief that he could teach Roxanne Quantum Physics in a minute. Very in-character. ]
| PrayerGirl chapter 6 . 1/11/2011
I loved this chapter! Fav so far! Yu made them so cute!
| Emmalyn chapter 6 . 1/11/2011
Hehe, very cute chapter! Your characterizations are perfect, and I especially love how you wrote the argument and resolution. It was very realistic emotionally and pacing-wise, if that makes sense. (And I can relate to the last part, as I'm married to a theoretical mathematician, lol! Sometimes I don't understand anything he's talking about.) But I gotta agree; nerdiness is definitely a plus. ;)
Can't wait to read the next chapter! :D
| jkj2m chapter 6 . 1/11/2011
Great chapter! I like the dialogue and interactions. The ending was amusing. Please continue. :D
| Emmalyn chapter 5 . 1/6/2011
Great story so far! Well-written action, snappy dialogue, a quick-moving plot, and an OC that doesn't make me want to kill her (okay, maybe she does, but not for the typical Mary-Sue-type reasons!)...anyway, I'm hooked. Can't wait to read more! :D