|Reviews for Watching Over You|
| Hana chapter 1 . 7/5/2011
The best written fanfic I've read so far. The way you told the story and the choices of words are somewhat similar to watching a good Japanese movie or drama; original and sometimes unexpectedly surprising. Honestly, I was surprised there were many fanfics on this particular drama. It seemed many of the writers luv to study and write about the relationship between the two brothers. You must be a great fan as I am of Jdramas and I've been watching a number of great versatile actors who I would luv to put in a drama, fictionally of cause. If you could come up with a story involving them with a theme of family relationship; conflict, trust, fate, parents and children, brothers etc. it would be a nice read indeed..:) I'm imagining Takenouchi Yutaka as the loving husband to Nakayama Miho with Miura Haruma as the loyal but complex teenage son. This solid family somehow encountered a major problem when it is learnt that the dad once cheated on the mom during a tough emotional time with Shinohara Ryoko who ended giving birth to a another boy, Yamada Ryosuke. Horikita Maki is the supportive gal friend to the eldest son. The drama is the journey on how these characters confront their problems and how they learn to resolve them by helping each other. Interested? Hope so...:) I'm thinking about their characters from certain dramas; Yutaka's character from Psycho Doctor who's an expert in solving other peoples' problems but not his own, Miho's sweet, trusting and loyal Rieru from Love 2000, independent but indecisive Ryoko from Anego, a smart confident Haruma from Bloody Monday who turns rebellious for certain reasons as in Koizora, a brave Ryosuke from Hidarime Tantei Eye, minus the power...:) and the clueless Maki from Memoirs of a Teenage Amnesiac. Hoping for your consideration and to finally read it somehow...;) Regards. Good luck!
| Izzu chapter 1 . 6/28/2011
Suddenly I'm thinking about my nephew. Hmmm...
Aaaaaaaaaaaaaa Ainosuke Baby is so cute!
| tsubasaquill chapter 1 . 12/2/2010
this was so beautiful...OMG I'm afraid nothing I can say can measure it's prettiness.
The part from the past with the young Yuma and the baby Ainosuke had me smiling like anything and your observant Yumehito stole my heart...
the last line...I felt like I could have given you an applause for the way you ended this!
Amazing use of words, perfect descriptions, and a smooth flow of the emotions in the story...
this was, no doubt...a perfect composition!
| Hotaru Kai chapter 1 . 12/1/2010
Well your oneshot is certainly extremely better than my oneshot. I enjoyed it and as usual am most likely to be re-reading it often until an update on your multi-fic i just luc them that much XD