Reviews for Tears of the Phoenix
atlantis51 chapter 30 . 4/18
Strange! But what happened to their daughter Molly?
atlantis51 chapter 28 . 4/18
Awesome battle! And I KNEW Harry wasn't dead!
atlantis51 chapter 17 . 4/18
Things are getting hairy! I'm sorry Mad-eye is gone, I sort of liked him, what with his twirling eye and all.
atlantis51 chapter 12 . 4/18
Dumledore is a freaking idiot! Still keeping secrets, the old fool!
atlantis51 chapter 11 . 4/18
Ok, I forgive you! Daphne is NOT dead! I was really heart broken!
atlantis51 chapter 8 . 4/18
I'm so sad that Daphne is dead! Why oh why did you have to kill her?
atlantis51 chapter 1 . 4/18
So it looks like Harry still hasn't told Mrs. Weasley the REAL truth about Ally and himself? Phoenix powers and live forever?
Guest chapter 1 . 3/28
I really really struggled through the first story with all the rampant stupidity, forgotten training, plot holes, handing out secrets like candy to everyone but keeping secrets from friends, procrastination, and lastly an author whom is incapable of writing a character capable of making intelligent choices. Drama created from being willfully blind and stupid does not good entertainment make. Feel like I have wasted my time and actually dragged my mood down.
BillBrink chapter 3 . 2/20
The Weasleys are one focus of your story, but you haven't said anything about Percy. Just wondering if he is anti or pro Harry. You mentioned Charlie in the first story, but nothing since then. I can't imagine all the younger kids fighting the war and the three single, older ones just staying out of it.
I'm glad you showed a loss of Harry's forces, but wonder why you chose Susan, as she is a popular character in fan fiction. Perhaps that is why? It feels more of a loss than if you chose Emily, for example.
stacygrrl2002 chapter 15 . 1/10
old and set in his ways, still not seeing the world beyond his own from a century ago
stylo1 chapter 3 . 12/20/2017
i dont understand last story they took out his main force most of his inner circle how is it he could launch these counter attacks. also molly really disgust me, she was happy to send harry back to the dursleys where he was unhappy but when he is happy with his wife and child she asks him to come with her
Guest chapter 30 . 11/4/2017
excellent story
BlueSeraphos chapter 1 . 9/20/2017
This is me reading and crying at the Battle of Hogwarts. This is also me reading the last chappie and expecting a good ending to come face to face with a wonderful slap to the face that spelled cliffhanger and sequel.
Guest chapter 29 . 5/30/2017
good thing in my stories they won't be no one dying unlike others who follows the books and be like rowling who loves making harry life a living hell not me
stacygrrl2002 chapter 5 . 5/15/2017
Where's andi? What's the box for? Does it make you not realize time passage to give the fire time to kill? In three hours the house should have been engulfed or suffocated Harry and draco
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