Reviews for Jingle Bells, Shotgun Shells
Beckydaspatz chapter 14 . 12/19/2011
Welcome to the end,

the final chapter of this tale.

Sam and Dean together,

is a team that just can't fail.

I never thought I'd write,

a lengthy story in this style.

A heartfelt thanks to all of you,

for making it worthwhile!-

You're welcome for reviews

they always flow straight from my hand

I feel the need to praise your works and tell

that this story and you are grand.

It managed to lift my spirits

and chase away the Christmas blues

Who the hell needs carolers when

I've been blessed with you! :D
Beckydaspatz chapter 13 . 12/19/2011
Dean makes a hissing sound,

and Sam can feel his body twitch.

He smiles a bit when next he hears,

'Sam just knock it off, you little bitch.'

Sam tries to keep it fun,

as he continues with his work.

'C'mon Dean, thought you were tough,

just sit still...don't be a jerk.'-Oh brilliant! What a cute and funny little snippet from the boys to keep the mood light! Loved it!
Beckydaspatz chapter 12 . 12/19/2011
He downs the magic pills,

and waits for sleep to take its hold.

He wants to drift to nothingness,

but his pain increases by ten fold.-But WHY? Seems like it isn't quite over for Dean yet. THANK YOU! :D
Beckydaspatz chapter 11 . 12/19/2011
The snow begins to fade,

his brother's words they make it through.

Dean expels a pent up sigh,

and wants to shout a big YAHOO!

Cuz all that concerns Dean,

is the promise he once made.

The one his father asked of him,

before his debt to death was paid.-In the midst of all the crazy and fun you sneak in some sadness. The promise haunts Dean, but we (the fans) wouldn't have it any other way. Wonderful!
Beckydaspatz chapter 10 . 12/19/2011
Sam stands there in a daze,

his eyes transfixed upon the sight.

He shakes his head, kneels in front of Dean,

grabs his wrists and holds on tight.

He can see a stream of blood,

as it flows down his brother's face.

With the wild look in Dean's green orbs,

he must still be out there, still on the chase.- Good going Sammy M.D. Love this nice little twist at the end.

'You need to focus on my voice Dean,

when I tell you I am fine.

The blood that you can see right now,

belongs to you, it is not mine.'

'So stop your frantic search bro,

the hunt is over, the bitch is dead.

It's hard to concentrate I know,

you took a vicious blow to the head.'- I absolutely ADORE the fact that Dean is the hurt one and of course he thinks Sam is hurt. SOOOOOO good Dorothy! GREAT JOB!
Beckydaspatz chapter 9 . 12/19/2011
The brothers finally reach their room,

and Sam feels a moment of relief.

But of course it turns out to be short lived,

and quickly morphs to disbelief.

He sees his wounded brother now,

as he falls down upon his knees.

Dean seems to struggle against thin air,

and shouts 'Sam! show me where you are now. Please!'-Whoa, angst! I knew you were gonna throw some of that in there! It's so deliciously fun :)
Beckydaspatz chapter 8 . 12/19/2011
The younger brother reaches out,

as Dean mutters words that make no sense.

He needs to get him to the here and now,

so the trip to the room can then commence.- I love me some caring Sammy *melts*

Dean seems like he is in major need of a siesta! So happy there is more! :D
Beckydaspatz chapter 7 . 12/19/2011
Sam feels a smile upon his lips,

as the motel comes into view.

But as he glances over at his bro,

he notices his skin has a palish hue.

Dean feels the movement of the car,

and hears his baby's engine roar,

He tries to think why he is not the one,

who has put her pedal to the floor.

He tries to focus fuzzy eyes,

and turns his head towards the wheel.

He smiles when he sees his brother's face,

and quips 'Hey S'm, what's the big deal.- Even in fun, Christmas land you still manage to NAIL the description and characteristics and just everything. I'm super jealous, but mostly impressed!
Beckydaspatz chapter 6 . 12/19/2011
It just gets BETTER! How many chapters are in this one *rushes off to see* Fourteen! Holy crap! Merry Christmas to ME! :-D

Sam speaks a little louder then,

to try and snap the fevers hold,

He bellows out a 'Still with me Dean',

and hears a shaky 'c..c..cold.'- Poor Dean, always freezing his oh so tasty ass off. X-P
Beckydaspatz chapter 5 . 12/19/2011
Sam has seen it all before,

Dean's stubborn ass just can't give in.

Won't admit for once he needs some help,

it's a stupid Winchester sin.- SOOOOOOOOO true. But that is why we love them!

How on Earth did you manage to come up with such a cool idea and tell a story through song at the same time! Cause you're awesome? Oh yeah :)
Beckydaspatz chapter 4 . 12/19/2011
Sam holds his brother's face,

and whispers in his ear.

'C'mon we need to go right now,

and get you out of here'.

Dean startles at the sound,

and swats away his brother's hand.

'Just get a grip there would you bro,

you know it's chick flicks I can't stand.'-Bwhahahahaa! Oh those boys. How I love them, and this!
Beckydaspatz chapter 3 . 12/19/2011
But Sam won't let him rest to long,

or there's a chance he'll freeze to death.- I know it's not supposed to be funny, but when you are humming 'Jingle Bells' it's flipping hilarious!

Just what I needed Dorothy, LOVE it!
Beckydaspatz chapter 2 . 12/19/2011
So AHHHHHSOME! :D

He screams HEY BITCH! with all his might.-hehe

And Dean feels a sense of Sammy pride.- Awwww! Such a fun filled chapter, would you believe that when I am reading this I am bobbing my head along to the tune, cause I totally am. :P
Beckydaspatz chapter 1 . 12/19/2011
OH, I LOVE this! *squee* You have just kick started my ass into holiday cheer! And look more chapters! YAY! :D

his smartass wit will never bend.- Thank GOD for that!
lanternheart chapter 14 . 11/28/2011
NOOOOO! I DEMAND SEQUAL!

But... it's near X-mas again... DO IT! D:
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