Reviews for Crossing Moon
Kolock chapter 2 . 12/2/2010
Great story so far. It is interesting to see how you are keeping both stories moving together but still running your own thing. I am looking forward to more.

Also I am glad you are still alive, been awhile since you posted a story. Hope this is new trend.

Good job and please keep writing.
Mizuno Tenshi2 chapter 2 . 12/2/2010
Weird, yet amusing. Good job! Definitely a new twist on the fukufic.
tuatara chapter 1 . 12/2/2010
It's nice to see this posted here. I'd be quite pleased if it were continued, much like Girl Days.

I think the complaints about the lack of Ranma-ness in Usagi are somewhat off the mark. There's actually a significant amount of Ranma to be found if you pay close attention, but do remember that we weren't just starting with canon Ranma in the first place. This was a Ranma who always felt like a girl, even if he didn't exactly realize it. Do we have any evidence that Ranma didn't tend to babble when excited? Or that he was ever nearly as arrogant and cocky as canon Ranma?

The line early on about the soul influencing personality is pretty much key here. The point is that Usagi was always predisposed to that sort of personality, but that it was masked by a layer of (apparently only partially successful) "Man Amongst Men" training.

I do agree that the pacing is fairly rushed, at least in the second chapter, though I think that has to do with the focus clearly being on the Moon elements rather than the Ranma aspects. But skimming over the Usagi-Mamoru angle with just a few broad details does seem kind of strange.

Anyway, I do hope we just might see some more of this after so long!
Dumbledork chapter 2 . 12/1/2010
I love it. I would be happy to get more of this.
mmoondragon chapter 2 . 12/1/2010
Wonderful start. I personally think that Ranma is a little too girly for the most part but I can see where you are coming from. Cant wait for more.
ellf chapter 2 . 12/1/2010
Well, Kenko, it's been a while. You going to continue this fic or any of your others soon-ish then?
Jimm chapter 2 . 12/1/2010
Very fun. :-) Thanks for sharing it with us.
Questara chapter 2 . 12/1/2010
This seems very familiar, but the ending didn't seem quite as familiar, here's hoping your writing new stuff again :)
cevgar chapter 1 . 12/1/2010
Started off good. Fantastic even. I was really getting my hopes up for this fic.

...which promptly ended with "I'm a girl. Weird." That is not the reaction I was looking for. I lost all interest with, "My hair has to be my best feature."

Point: If the princess needed to be reborn, and Usagi was pretty much a shell to keep her in until the time was right; why on earth was Usagi the one to pop out of the springs?
AshK1980 chapter 2 . 12/1/2010
Nice work! Keep the great chapters coming!
AshK1980 chapter 1 . 12/1/2010
Nice start on what looks to be an excellent story!


Bree R chapter 2 . 12/1/2010
I read this a few years ago but it's nice to see it here. Hopefully that means you're thinking of doing something more with it? Hope so could've been fun. That said wish there was still a bit more Ranma in 'Usagi' still fun work.
Sora with an S chapter 2 . 12/1/2010
So, you decided to post this story on now? Cool.

If you could continue it, that'd be brilliant, 'cause I do like this story.
Baughn chapter 1 . 12/1/2010
Hm. While this is intriguing, Usagi seems off character.

It goes without saying that Ranma was never this bubbly, but.. Usagi wasn't either. Friendly, yes, but never that *blonde*. It's.. out of boundary, perhaps.
O'Donoghue chapter 2 . 12/1/2010
While combining the leads isn't a bad way to crossover, it does rob the presence of both and like any restart the romance aspect will take time to flourish.

But other than that a solid read and I look forward to where you take it.
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