Reviews for Narutos Desires
Polaruspax chapter 1 . 1/23
Was going good until you had some bullshit about his dads "clan" which was not a clan at all... it is just some stupid excuse for shit writers to give naruto a harem and harems themselves are for shit writers who cant write romance at all... this is a shit story never write anything again.
lord Alex nation chapter 1 . 10/20/2016
great story
my 2 guys chapter 5 . 5/8/2016
that was good keep the chapters coming
my 2 guys chapter 4 . 5/8/2016
that was good keep the chapters coming
my 2 guys chapter 3 . 3/30/2016
that was good keep the chapters coming
my 2 guys chapter 2 . 3/29/2016
that was good keep the chapters coming
my 2 guys chapter 1 . 3/27/2016
that was good keep the chapters coming
my 2 guys chapter 1 . 3/27/2016
/that
genesicgaogaigarvsgodgundam chapter 1 . 1/31/2016
nice job
Guest chapter 1 . 11/19/2014
It should have been just him & Hinata
Takai153 chapter 5 . 12/17/2013
Great chapter! So glad to see Shion, and I love the use of Shadow Clones! Wish this wasn't the last chapter.
Raptorcloak chapter 1 . 11/27/2013
I love how Naruto calls Hinata hime since it suits her quite well! I enjoyed this brilliant lemon of this pairing and I hope you make more in the future.
Lionheart chapter 1 . 11/27/2013
Rofl I love how you redid your whole story to match what's happening 3 years AFTER you first published it
bankai777 chapter 5 . 11/27/2013
shion sure knows how to make naruto really happy.
Leaf Ranger chapter 5 . 11/25/2013
Hmmm. very nice, very smexy. XD Excellent work here. XD
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