|Reviews for Alice|
| arianaconstantina chapter 7 . 7/11/2011
i like this chapter, its kinda G rated lol but keep updating. And your chapter names r funny but good.
| Indigo Grey chapter 7 . 6/23/2011
Shows promise :D I consider myself an EMMA and know a few ALICES.
| vampireaddict08 chapter 7 . 6/22/2011
Interesting very cool chapters... Gimme the goods already woman! Lol jk te change in Alice over Evan is very intriguing. Please update soon
| SejiADettswic chapter 6 . 6/21/2011
well goodness she needs to get a life, get in touch with her inner PERSON or something... good job updating!
| Queen Of Dead Hearts chapter 4 . 2/3/2011
Kinda blunt. And no one in school is THAT bitchy. It's all passive aggressive bitchiness. Personally, I would love to be able to pour soda on people's heads . . . And grab other people by their hair and hit them over the head with a fire extinquisher. But as my guidance counselor pointed out to me, that's WRONG. (sure . . .) Anyway, it's a little atypical for a girl to ask a guy out . . . especially after knowing him for two seconds . . .
| Queen Of Dead Hearts chapter 3 . 2/3/2011
Poor wittle birdies . . .
| Queen Of Dead Hearts chapter 2 . 2/3/2011
Usually it's the date, then the kiss. Or the kiss happens when you're drunk and at a party or some combination of that. Usually not in a hallway at school with someone you know you're going to be seeing every day . . .
But ANYWAY, funny. I like the chapter name again. I also like the term erection-worthy. It's right up there with 'orgasmic.' Another great word.
| Queen Of Dead Hearts chapter 1 . 2/3/2011
Interesting. I like the title. And the line; she was quite beautiful for a human, quite beautiful for a brunette too. Funny. It's a little choppy, but I see that in a LOT of the stories I beta for some reason. Like in Blood Stained Roses. Anyway . . . It seems interesting. Glad you didn't give away everything all at once. It's nice to keep a little mystery.
| x Red Blood Lies Love x chapter 4 . 12/5/2010
ohh she just got owned! haha poor her though but then again wat do u excepct? Please update soon xxx
- Jezaline-Fury xxxxx
| vampire.lover458 chapter 4 . 12/4/2010
Haha i checked out ur pics and wen i clicked on evans i realised in my storie soft blood thats wat the guy Lucas looks like lol thats weird. Anyway loved this fanfic update soon!
| SejiADettswic chapter 2 . 12/3/2010
love ur new story. i can tell it's gonna b fab. it is a little sexual if u know what i mean...the direction your heading makes me think u should do this as M. sound good?
i heart you, Seji
| arianaconstantina chapter 1 . 12/1/2010
ummmmm nice, a little disturbing with all the kissing, grinding and what not... but it is a good story