read Last night in archive... good very good one ! thank you very much !

Great story!

Really good! This one goes on my favorites list.

Great fic! Nice and actiony, feels like a season final but no cliffhanger ending. Also it's really nice to read a fic which is about a case :D

This was one of the more original fan fiction storylines floating around that I've found...
Why couldn't NCIS do something like this...

love it

AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME

Fantastic story. Excellent case fic and A on the Tony whump and heroics. I absolutely loved it. Thank you so much. xo

really really good :)

Well, I just finished re-re-reading this - again- and have to tell you that it's extremely well-written, characters are spot on, well-balanced action, logical and not totally obvious mystery, and just overall great! Hope you are inspired to return to NCIS-world again sometime, because you are definitely one of my absolute favorite writers.

Okay I've been a huge fan of your Emergency fics but you wrote NCIS too?! Loved this!

F.a.n.t.a.s.t.i.c. Wow. Did I mention that this was fantastic? I loved this story! Really liked the plot, really liked the team bonding, really liked the injured yet still heroic Tony. Loved it!

Lol. Nicely done.

Good Story. Pretty captivating. What I don't get though is why they're so surprised to find out there's a second shooter. Didn't they figure out Albert had a partner back in Chapter 3 or something?

Very good story, perfect! I was so nervous at some times and I was freaked out about discovering who the second shooter was. Besides, I do love the ending ;) Great job!