Reviews for Tactician's Pride
Wendy A.S. Cole chapter 4 . 8/25/2011
This is an amazingly done story thus far! I love the detail that you add to the story that really helps add some solidity. Hope you update soon! :)
AJ aka stalker chapter 4 . 8/7/2011
nice... but i am confused... dose he like her and dose she now know it?
AJ aka stalker chapter 3 . 8/7/2011
i liked the fact that you skiped those... i agree with you(for the story), they were fillers,

S.
AJ aka stalker chapter 2 . 8/7/2011
wow loved it. i personly think you nailed sain... he is as he was in the game. loved how your changing it though,

S.
AJ aka stalker chapter 1 . 8/7/2011
now i wish i could find my game boy... but good story,

S.
Bloody Writing on The Wall chapter 1 . 7/30/2011
This is a refreshing effort and for that, I commend you. After all, that's what novelizations are for: introspection, exploration, and character development.

I do think that the grammatical errors detract from what is otherwise solid writing. Though this might seem highly presumptuous in a review on a relatively old story ("old" being somewhere around half a year) I suggest you find a thorough beta to comb through each chapter. Otherwise, it's a delight so far.
Morality0duality chapter 3 . 1/19/2011
I like your dragon age combat schema as well as your use of physics. You doing very well. Please I look forward to an update or a reply.
Morality0duality chapter 2 . 1/19/2011
I liked how this went joy mixed with sadness reality in fantasy I approve. Thought when introduce florina you repeated Kent name instead of Sain.
Morality0duality chapter 1 . 1/19/2011
Your tactician shows signs of the thief class flowing for that he could be a rouge assasin ranger mechanic acrobat bard twin, blader, whisper, duelist, if learned magic ninja. I like how this goes good realism. Pplease reply
Sekiryutei Issei Hyoudou chapter 3 . 1/18/2011
very nice
GreatLight432 chapter 2 . 12/7/2010
Hm, just found this fic. As a long time Fire Emblem fan, I have to say that you're doing the world of FE7 considerable justice. One glaring point, however: when you switch viewpoints, or days, or locations, you need to signify it with something. Personally, I use a row of hyphens, but you could use anything else. That way, it's not so jarring when someone reads a comment made, and then wonder why Mark has suddenly started talking like Sain, only to discover that it IS Sain talking.:D

If you're looking for a beta, or someone to help you smooth out rough spots in the fic, keep me in mind! You've got a lot of potential here, and I like the way you're working thus far. Keep it up, and just polish the rough spots.;)
Sekiryutei Issei Hyoudou chapter 2 . 12/4/2010
I like the end of this chapter.
Sekiryutei Issei Hyoudou chapter 1 . 12/3/2010
this is a very interesting take of fire emblem 7
Chaos Hero Mark chapter 1 . 12/3/2010
Just a heads up though. Your summary said FE 6, but the first chapter was of FE 7, the 'Footsteps Of Fate' chapter. Other than that, I'll keep an eye out for this. Keep writing.
Gunlord500 chapter 1 . 12/1/2010
Niiiice! This is pretty good for a tactician fic. I'm definitely glad you're part of the "no godlike OCs" crowd, that's definitely my style 8) Pretty well written overall, though you seem to forget words and commas here and there, but no biggie. Characterization is *okay*...you're right that devotion is not a far step from obsession, but it's not exactly right next to it-don't go overboard with Kent. Other than that though, good goin :D
45 | « Prev Page 1 .. 3