|Reviews for A Punch to the Face|
| xXxSkyLifexXx chapter 1 . 11/12/2011
Pfft, I can completely imagine this at the moment, and I have nothing to say... Haha, just continue with the mission, okay? (Really, at the end I was just laughing away quietly, because having parents wonder if you're mentally crazy is bad...)
| Friendly Kitty chapter 1 . 6/12/2011
Lol, I just love Hina's famous punch XD
Anyways, love it :D
| James Birdsong chapter 1 . 2/1/2011
Odd but quite good :)
| MaidenAlice chapter 1 . 12/30/2010
Ah that great that would be something he would do and how she would respond.
| Kinetic Sleeper chapter 1 . 12/11/2010
*Kinetic falls on her knees in gratitude* I would like to show my extreme happiness to you for writing a PB fanfic- I was beginning to think no one would ever check that section and see how empty it was! In fact, when I first started writing my fic, I thought I would have to categorise it under 'miscellaneous', because there WAS no PB category; turns out there was, it just didn't show up cuz no one had written a story for it. So, once again, my thanks for helping to fill it up! Now, on to the actual review:
I am extremely pleased to say that you have great grammar and spelling! So few people nowadays do...The story itself is really good too- short but sweet ). You've managed to give us all the information we need in just a few words, like the fact that Nishizaki and Yutaka are back together and the whole description of Hina's punch was humorous, but kind of conveyed Koshiba's feelings at the same time. On the whole, good job for putting in so much good stuff in so few sentences!
| colormetessa chapter 1 . 12/5/2010
Ah you gotta love Koshiba. Great job ;D