Reviews for stripped of inadequacies
stars shine out chapter 1 . 5/1/2012
Awwww! That's an absolutely beautiful poem! I completely adore it!
kingslayers chapter 1 . 3/1/2011
Awwwwwwww. That's so cute. And sweet. And precious.
purple pear 87 chapter 1 . 1/21/2011
I love your writing. I'm not sure what else to say because it's left me with an odd hollow feeling in my chest. I can relate to Rose, except I haven't found that boy yet.

Congratulations. :)
Sam Storsky chapter 1 . 1/8/2011
This one shows a special aspect of Rose no one really likes to write about...but I like it. It shoes the burdens of coming from such a big family and it's completely rational that she feels that way because Ron did once, too.

Great job again!

Love,

SAM :)
WelcomeToLeahland xD chapter 1 . 12/23/2010
Love 3
deathpale chapter 1 . 12/8/2010
Adorable! Makes you want to fall in love... :)

Jenny :)
frouwe chapter 1 . 12/2/2010
That was so cute. Far from perfect, but we all are. Pretty long, too, but you managed to make it work somehow. It was also kind of weird, because it was alligned to the left, instead of centred like most free verses. It's a matter of taste, I guess.

Keep on the good work! And congrats on your boyfriend, he sounds perfect!