Reviews for Step By Agonising Step
fantasdancer chapter 1 . 12/17/2010
excellent work! Really captured the characters well.
turmlicht chapter 1 . 12/4/2010
This comment is going to be soppy and maybe I should be sorry for it. Only I can't help it. So here it comes: Ray's so absolutely CUTE when he's hurting! Please, don't hate me for this. I know, I should feel very different, so I profoundly apologize to both of you, dear Angelfish and Ray for being such a bitch. At least Bodie has got his priorities right: Keeping watch over Ray comes first :-))
finnhere2 chapter 1 . 12/2/2010
I'm so glad you decided to post this! Poor poor Ray...

This is well written and thorough, still also thrilling as with the first reading I kept on wondering whether Bodie would rush back in time, or if Ray would make it to the phone...

I'm happy you decided finally make fun of the catheder. Big thumbs up for that! Hugs!