Reviews for Life
xBBx chapter 1 . 5/1/2012
Completely depressing and entirely glad it didn't happen in Canon, but good writing skill. :)

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LilithL2 chapter 1 . 3/28/2012
harsh!

but i love it! :)
I Was Here Moments Ago chapter 1 . 12/3/2010
This was beautifully written, and so heartbreaking.
Fantasy Cat chapter 1 . 12/2/2010
My god, that was heartbreaking...
AlleyKitty chapter 1 . 12/2/2010
That was awesome! A fate some would say is worse thatn death...
marian93 chapter 1 . 12/2/2010
Well, crap..

That was just heart-breaking.

Scratch that. It was heart-crushing/shattering/pulverizing to unrecognizable pieces.

I'm crying now... In the middle of chemistry class. Sure, it would be embarassing if I wasn't so caught up in the terribly sad awesomeness of this story.

So, yeah. That was just amazing. All the reactions, Walter losing that spark he had, Astrid leaving... It was all extremely believable and well-written.

And Peter. Him visiting her every month... That was just... Beautifully devastating. I especially loved that you made us think she was dead almost up until the end. The fact she was actually in a mental hospital, alive but... Well, essentially dead to the world, it's somehow worse.

Just... Wow. I loved this. If you were going for heart-wrenching, you nailed it... :')
Nephite chapter 1 . 12/2/2010
That was really sad but it was really well written. I liked it. Good job!
Sunny-Y chapter 1 . 12/2/2010
Oh, sooo sad! Would be easier for Peter to visit a graveyard, I think.