Reviews for A Taste of a Salty Breeze
shkaa chapter 2 . 12/12/2012
Too OOC...
-Arabella
ApplesBananas chapter 2 . 2/4/2011
That was good at first, but your second chapter made it stupid.
iAmMissA chapter 2 . 12/3/2010
Hmmm... very well written! But I think it would have been more "realistic" if Percy had been cheating with Rachel. But please don't get me wrong! I do like this story! Just trying to give some advice! Thanks for listening to my rambles! :)

~Miss A
FinnickOdair-Will-Live-Forever chapter 2 . 12/2/2010
Wow! Great fanfic!:) You should do another chater where they get revenge on Athena!:)
cherry blossoms and peach chapter 2 . 12/2/2010
WTF? Percy cheated on Annabeth with ATHENA? As in, the goddess who strongly dislikes him? And Annabeth called her mother a bitch? OOC much?