Reviews for Intrusion
Juicy Mango chapter 1 . 3/24/2012
My God... I actually heard his voice *shakes it fear*

Bravo my friend you really did a great job at this! :)
Allin Aspire chapter 1 . 9/2/2011
hot damn! that was. wow. that was real. i HEARD his voice, like he was reciting it back to me, as if megabyte was directing this monologue to bob and, I, being an intruder, just happened to hear it being said. this was beautifully real. and it gave me a whole new experience in what 'reading' is like. thank you. MUCH LOVE!
Linebeck chapter 1 . 2/4/2011
Awesome. I think you did a great job with making Megabyte sound like Megabyte. I can here him narrating this~