|Reviews for Konoha's Silver Shinobi|
| Guest chapter 18 . 2/6
You weakened gin a lot but that's what keeps the story interesting. Glad it didn't die
| Valor-Derzod chapter 5 . 2/3
barely trained genin besting a jonin in any situation is ridiculous and most fanfics piss me off because they lower Kakashi's skill to the point that genin could beat him which is bullshit. That's like frank gore or marshawn lynch (those are some beastly ass names aren't they) losing to 3 high school top linebackers after a year retired. It's not going to happen. There is no situation short of a crippling injury beforehand that would allow for any of this to happen in either the ninja training or the football example.
| bootskitty328 chapter 17 . 1/31
Also congratulations on getting married!
| bootskitty328 chapter 18 . 1/31
I love this Story! I love the plot, the new character dimensions while still keeping them true, and I love the length of the Chapters! I'miss really looking forward ton future chapters.
In regards to the story plot itself, I really like it and I'm glad you brought zabuza and Haku back into the picture because I was really starting to wonder where they had gone. I really like the dynamics that you have created for team seven, including the teamwork aspect, the communication, how close everyone is, and the fact that everyone is learning how to harness their raitsu.
Speaking of their raistu, if all of them could use flash step, then why aren't they using it as often. They use it in fights sometimes, but most of the time they don't use it, such as avoiding an incoming attack. Is it to the fact that they aren't used to using it like that, they aren't skilled enough to do it yet or that they can't think of using it in the middle of a fight?
Also I'm really interested in how the whole Sasuke leaving thing is going to be like. You said that he's going to leave the village, but you didn't say anything about him actually going to orochimaru. But if he doesn't go to orochimaru then I'm not sure what else he would be doing, perhaps end up in soul society? Another thought I had, is that he will become a spy for the leaf against orochimaru.
Honestly not to sure where theses thoughts are coming from, or where they are going but these are my theories and questions. Looking forward to the next Chapters! n_n
| Six Foot Assassin chapter 14 . 1/24
It's amazing how a more powerful Naruto does worse then canon Naruto at the same thing. Kiba has literally 2 moves and both of them are easy to avoid. It's like everyone suddenly forgets about the kawarimi, Kakashi uses that jutsu to escape pretty much anything all the time. Well until Naruto turned into DBZ that is.
Even Naruto's Rinnegan I get the feeling is downplayed, yes he doesn't know how to properly use it yet but he knows how to use some of the abilities. Nagato made Konoha and Akatsuki his bitches because of the Rinnegan and his paths weren't even fighting together. He had each path in a different part of the village and they still couldn't beat him. Even Naruto would of been dead if it wasn't for Kurama trying to escape.
| slythefoxx2 chapter 7 . 1/22
I'm not enjoying reading this. You just add story details that don't mean anything. Naruto meets Gin, gets adopted but is just as unskilled as he would have been had he never met because he leaves for years. The fight with Zabuza goes worse and Naruto has a sword he can't even really use because... because! Kakashi calls his sensei's son fox boy in front of Hiruzen and Hiruzen lets Naruto stay on the team? Stories that have things happen "because" are rarely good.
| blasterdog chapter 18 . 1/4
Great chapter man. How strong is itachi compared to the 13 captains?
| a7xfanatic1195 chapter 18 . 12/9/2016
Happy to see you back man, and I'm excited to see more of this story!
| janed12000 chapter 7 . 12/4/2016
Ooops my bad. Connected on the wrong with.
| janed12000 chapter 7 . 12/4/2016
I kept waiting for Susano but he must not have it yet. I was also waiting for chidori.
| marquis.shax chapter 18 . 11/28/2016
huh you know now that i think about it the time difference would work great for soul society. think about it a cople months in soul society was 6 years or so in narutos world. so by that logic sending shinigami to that world ti train could get them their bankai within a few years of tie in soul society
| marquis.shax chapter 16 . 11/27/2016
Chidori is a seperate jutsu from Raikiri as the Raikiri is a stronger version of it and I don't think it makes the chirping noise either. Also as for Zabuza not having his blade that's an easy fix as shown during the war as he can summon his blade back to him as there's a seal on his hand and the blade
| marquis.shax chapter 15 . 11/27/2016
you should rephrase that about the dojutsu as there's 3 FAMOUS dojutsu but there is at least 1 (possibly 2 more) there's Ranmaru's dojutsu which might or might not be the blood dragon eye (i think that's the name of it anyways)
| echo echo chapter 18 . 11/26/2016
Didn't read the story. This is in response to a review you wrote for :FROM DARKNESS:
Kubikiribocho was sliced through by Killer Bee with Lightning chakra so there is no way in hell it would stand up to a light saber. It obviously would not be force resistant as chakra is force baced in the story and Lightsabers are force attuned and so would have very similar abilities. So no, the butcher knife would be toast and so would Suigetsu.
| marquis.shax chapter 4 . 11/26/2016
wow you've made Kakashi a real dick when the first two things he says are "Protect Sasuke" and Fox Boy. Clearly he cares even less for Naruto in your story than he did for him in canon as was evidenced by the fact that he taught Nartuo absolutely jack shit yet every single time we saw Sasuke fight he'd bust out some new jutsu and then there's the fact that he ditched Naruto an Sakura first chance he got to focus entirely on Sasuke lol