Reviews for Harry Potter and The discovered heart
Guest chapter 3 . 1/24
I can never read Hermione like this because she's supposed to be smart lol. Like I want to bash her head against a wall.
senawario chapter 1 . 11/12/2016
boring; skipped after getting about halfway thru
Guest chapter 16 . 1/29/2016
I loved! Please, keep writing
Guest chapter 9 . 11/9/2015
are you serious she cannot be pregnant. i was going to mention their lack of protection last chapter but i was thinking you probably just forgot. oh my gosh this is like the worst time ever to be pregnant Dx wonder whats gonna happen
XD chapter 1 . 8/22/2014
I find it REALLY hard to believe that Hermione would have time to put on makeup while on the run. It's kind of ridiculous. I mean, they barely had any food and had to change locations frequently, when would she find the time to put on makeup. Who would she try to impress, the snatchers? XD?
DragonTamer01 chapter 15 . 2/13/2014
What song is it that Harry sings to Hermione? I've watched Phantom Of The Opera a couple of times, but I don't remember which song that is.
DragonTamer01 chapter 8 . 1/27/2014
For a first SERIOUS love-scene, you did awesome!
dbzgtfan2004 chapter 1 . 4/24/2012
This is a good story. Please make some more. Harry and Hermione forever.
Dagger-Seishin chapter 16 . 3/31/2012
now i'm sacred to read the sequel. Shattered bond dosne't sound good.

well writtne this one tho.
Kcapp chapter 16 . 7/18/2011
I love it sofar, can't wait to read the shattered Bond. I hope it's as well writin as this one.
Neurotic-Martyr chapter 16 . 7/3/2011
OK by far you are so the WINNER of my challenge! And this is now one of my favorite stories, EVER! You did great! Thanks!
Guest chapter 8 . 6/27/2011
Not bad for ur first scene...would've been funny to have ron show up right then though lol...Oh btw meant to mention earlier but christmas time book 7 hermione is actually 18-her bday is sept 19 so she's technically a year older than the boys who r both 17 till the end of 7 (rons is in march n harrys july obviously) dun worry much about it, common mistake that unless u see jk's site or the lexicon u prolly wouldn't know since its unmentioned in the books
Crazy Twilight Addict chapter 2 . 6/21/2011
Love the use of "shackle her to him"...clever! :D
petros308 chapter 8 . 6/19/2011
I admit, i skimmed the love scene , and skipped it for plot
petros308 chapter 1 . 6/19/2011
Nice jumping point
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