Reviews for The Leaning Tower Of Cheese
it would be reyna chapter 1 . 4/11/2011
lol, Rose seems so mean. :)) I love her, but... Well, this is your story and I love it. :))
Kingdom Lights chapter 1 . 4/7/2011
I am so glad that you always have Rose and Scorpius being in a relationship, and it not working out. It's much more realistic than them being and blah blah blah.
XxXxDreamerxXxX chapter 1 . 1/6/2011
That was cute, although I have to say that this isn't my favorite pairing. I've never really thought of Scorp/Lucy, mostly because I ship Lucy with an OC and Scorpius with Rose. You probably already knew that.

I sitll liked this, it was funny at parts and I did like the characterization although it's different than mine.
RedCloakedMaiden chapter 1 . 1/6/2011
I love pizza :) This just made me a bit hungry, actually. And sad for Rose because she seems to be having some issues. But Lucy/Scorpius are too gosh-darn cute for me to support Scorpius/Rose in this story.
kingslayers chapter 1 . 12/27/2010
I'm so split! On one hand I LIKE Rose and Scorp stories, cos I like Hermione and I think it's awesome that rons daughter would date him... But you wrote this well. Ugh! So split! Have you any Dom and Scorp stories you could recommend me?
Bittersweet x chapter 1 . 12/24/2010
I hear what you say in your author's notes about Rose, but - and don't take this the wrong way! I love, love, love your writing, I'll come to that later, though - you really don't seem to like Rose, because I dunno if I read it wrong, but you always seem to pass her off as rather witchy...hee hee, pun fun! no.. but yeah. Yeah, so, that seems to be your characterization of Rose, quite a mean person, or maybe I'm just completely reading off the charts?

Moving on from that; Scorpius. He intrigues me. Before I started delving into your writing I'd always had this image of him as Rose and Al's nemesis and Lily's friend (because in my twisted world, Lily was always in Slytherin.) And, honestly, I still like that quite a bit, but I do enjoy seeing all the different pairings you've done, they're quite interesting to read.

This is a very long review and I haven't even addressed the point yet! :P


Aaaw, cute story. I kinda hate Scorpius/Lucy, but to each her own, and it's terribly sweet /3

:P You probably think me a loony by now :P
combeferring chapter 1 . 12/22/2010
Ahaa, I love this! Scorpius's sarcasm... Lucy's stubborn streak... The "leaning tower of cheese"...

It was just perfect :)

( and I love Scorpius Dominique too, but I'm developing a liking for this pairing now (; )
gryffindorgal87 chapter 1 . 12/19/2010
Those preservation wrappers sound amazing! Wish I had some! XD
NRC chapter 1 . 12/12/2010

Just wow.

This story had the perfect mix of sadness, bitterness, happiness, and it's incredibly wonderful how you managed to make it all work. I mean, there are some authors out there who just can't make the transition so smooth and believable, making their characters sound bipolar instead. But the way this story flows from one feeling to the next so smoothly is just... wow.

Your characters were also... in character. The way Scorpius is just so sarcastic, and Lucy is stubborn, and Rose is a beauty (okay, well, I didn't expect that bit). You built them up and stayed with their character, which I think some next gen authors -cough cough- find a bit hard because there's no definite basis for their character; there's no canon. So kudos to you for shelling out the character perfectly ]

Overall, a brilliant story. Definitely a favourite of mine ]
Radical.2 chapter 1 . 12/10/2010
Lol, I loved the pizza thing, that was pure genius! I really don't think Rose would have been that mean, but it was really well-written and very funny! Great job, keep writing! -TZ.
Kuss Mich Wach chapter 1 . 12/5/2010
This was so adorable! I absolutely loved it! I like how you have the story layed out. I've never really read a next-gen fic but, this was just wonderful! Keep up the good work! :D
Morghen chapter 1 . 12/5/2010
This pairing isn't one of my favorites, but I do think you did a good job with it. I liked the role that the pizza played. It kind of gave some humor to an otherwise angsty oneshot. Your Rose was a lot different than how most people write her, but I found the new characterization refreshing to read. I wish that Lucy would've been developed more because her characterization was a little flimsy but it wasn't too bad. It was nice to read a fic in which Scorpius is with someone other than Rose. Nice job!

ACCT REMOVED chapter 1 . 12/4/2010
You write Rose differently than I'm used to reading, but that's not a bad thing I kind of like it. As for the story itself I love the role that pizza played in it. Though I'm a huge fan of pizza your description of it as "bread with cheese" made me understand Scorpius's feelings about the food. Anyway, I liked the story even though I can't say i'm fond of Scorpius/Lily :)
whippetgurl chapter 1 . 12/3/2010
This is pretty well done! I do think Scorpius/Dominique is my favorite of your work though. Nevertheless, considering the pairing you were assigned. I really loved the part about getting over Rose at the end. The "cheesiness" at the beginning is pretty funny too, and I like how you tied back to it at the end... "leaning tower of cheese." XD NICE! 3 I like it a lot!
coeurfeyrac chapter 1 . 12/3/2010
/Oh/mygosh, this was absolutely lovely. The first couple of lines just /hit/ you really well, and the whole thing is adorable and gentle and gorgeous. You used the pizza prompt /so/ well- I do love Rose/Scorpius and Al/Scorp, but this makes me want to change my mind...

Really, really excellent :)
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