|Reviews for Infiltration|
| Sirens in the water chapter 4 . 12/28/2012
Please update! Please!
| EleKat chapter 4 . 10/19/2011
awesome! please update sooooon! :D
| vampiremuggle chapter 4 . 4/2/2011
awesome chapter! please update soon! (you said the next chapter was almost done but that was over a montha ago...) i love this story!
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| DARWIN51 chapter 4 . 3/6/2011
Really good please update soon!
| LostForeverInHisEyes chapter 4 . 3/1/2011
Sorry I didn't get around to reviewing before.
This is definitely intriguing and different, as a previous reviewer mentioned, regarding Hetty being in OSP. I'm enjoying it.
Curious as to whether this is actually a real kidnapping or a test that Hetty is putting them all through!
Something I wouldn't mind seeing is a little more of a look into how the team are feeling in their heads in the situations they are in. You've got a lot of dialogue which is fine, but not much on the internal workings of their minds. Just an idea.
Good luck with the next chapter.
| Searching4sanity chapter 3 . 1/28/2011
Cool. I really like where this story is heading. Not a normal search the city for Hetty, but it's inside OSP. That's just plain awesome!
| marian.gurl.13 chapter 1 . 1/21/2011
I love this! it is a great story! Good idea...there are no stories about Nell!
| lilli-glenanne chapter 2 . 1/18/2011
write more i love the eric nell romance thing i luv hetty being kidnaped but its kinda crazy cuz hettys like a mini elf ninja
| KmJ13 chapter 2 . 1/3/2011
Review! please keep writing!
| Motherofmytwo chapter 2 . 12/21/2010
Good so far. Can't wait to read more.
| KmJ13 chapter 1 . 12/13/2010
keep going, please!
I haven't seen any fanfics with nell in it, and she is like my favourite character. Keep going please!
| Kath chapter 1 . 12/6/2010
Definetly worth continuing! its AMAZINGand you can't leave us with a cliffie like that so PLEASE update soon!
| always.theheartbeat chapter 1 . 12/5/2010
I'm interested in this! Keep it going, I'll support you. :D
Hah, I love the banter. Totally in character. I'm assuming...hm. Well, the nice choice would be that Hetty's missing, Eric/Nell are down. But that might be a trick, and Eric/Nell is missing, then Hetty/Eric or Nell are down. Confusing stuff.
Anyway, great start!
| Searching4sanity chapter 1 . 12/4/2010
When you say 'down' does that mean dead or injured?
This is really good, honestly I wasn't going to read it unless it was well written which it was on a level of majorness, so definitely please continue it! Oh and if at all possible could you include some funnies between eric and nell?
| ShadowWolfDagger chapter 1 . 12/3/2010
Okay, I am curious, please continue it soon -