Reviews for A Heart That is Born
Kavara999 chapter 1 . 9/29/2012
Try to cool it with the commas...

This seems like it'd be a great story but I don't think i'll read on because of the over useage ;-;

I'm sorry D:
Kyuubi-kun666 chapter 11 . 1/5/2012
very good story pleaz continue
Bleq chapter 9 . 7/30/2011
You nave got a LOT of revising to do. It is spelled "from", for one. Two, I want my lemon scene. Three, speed it up
TheRealTayler13 chapter 11 . 7/23/2011
plz update soon cant wait to read more
Beautiful-Liar360 chapter 11 . 7/16/2011
What the hell omg hmmm what would noitorra look like as a child and really this crazy update soon YO
Legal Humor chapter 11 . 7/16/2011
Love it. PleasePleasePlease, update!
Jules Mordecai chapter 11 . 7/12/2011
Here is my honest opinion, and I mean no hard feelings! I must admit that when I first started to read this story, it felt like you were just kind of rewriting exactly what was going on in the anime/manga...but finally your original ideas came through! I love how Noitora was also turned into a child! Talk about karma! I really hope that you see this story through completion. And you are KILLING me! When will Ulqui finally kiss Orihime? But I do think you have done a great job at keeping him in character as he slowly starts to develop his emotions/feelings. It is definitely much more believable having him fighting his feelings and desires towards Orihime rather than just giving in to them. No matter how badly I may want him to just hurry up and kiss her, that just isn't Ulqui is it? I hope you get lots of inspiration and update soon!
nypsy chapter 11 . 7/10/2011
really can't even guess where this story is going. are chibi nnoi & nel gonna be buddies now, erasing nnoi's horrific actions as an adult?
nypsy chapter 10 . 6/30/2011
the mental image of a stunned/surprised grimm made me smile.

so loly will attack at worst possible time, huh. & i wonder what aizen is planning (since he does nothing w/o it serving his own goals/desires). definitely want ulqui to act out his erotic dreams b/c ulquihime is a hot hot pairing. can imagine hime's pure heart & affection melting ulqui's frozen metaphorical heart & eliciting emotions in him. update soon please
ladybugsscareme chapter 10 . 6/29/2011
ausome! when is the next chapter gonna be out? :D
ladybugsscareme chapter 9 . 6/25/2011
when will the next chapter be out? btw ausome story :)
briar black death rose chapter 5 . 6/4/2011
ya ulqui did some butt kicking xD
briar black death rose chapter 3 . 6/4/2011
aww he is so sweet giving her his jacket since she was cold :) gonna give ya some reviews since you have given me a lot and cause this story is rad
gorguts5 chapter 9 . 5/13/2011
Very good story I'll be following it so more chapters please. I like what u did with nnoitra btw something screams paybacks a bitch about that xD I didn't review the others because my OCD means I have to reach the end to comment or I feel uneasy sorry. I have 1 request though more Grimmjow xD
nypsy chapter 9 . 5/11/2011
i'm still finding it odd to read ulqui saying hime's name rather than onna/woman. old habits, you know? nice touch to have grimm get to 'play' w/girls before possibly disposing of them, but am wondering if by taking it upon himself to punish girls w/o first reporting to aizen ulqui may have set himself up for extra trouble. he's gotta make sure he always phrases things as they went against orders/aizen's wishes & not personalize it to hurting his hime.
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