|Reviews for The greatest gift of all|
| woodlandfairykirk chapter 1 . 8/11/2012
awwww! it was adorable!
| rm928 chapter 1 . 2/11/2011
Good one, I could just picture thos four sitting on a couch and Temari Elbowing Kankuro HARD for say that. still LOL its all good. "thank you sssoooo much Temari."
| Fired Feathers of a Pheonix chapter 1 . 1/12/2011
Good plot and nice fluff, but there are some things you should fix.
One: it does not snow in Sunagakure. It's a desert.
Two: When you use quotations, be sure to put some sort of period somewhere. It looks kids of stupid when you do this: "You'll see" he smiled. it should be "You'll see." He smiled. It just looks more professional.
Three: Temari does not say 'sweetheart.'
Four: It's Kankuro, not Konkoru.
Five: Don't do this: "..." It lookes stupid. Just say they didn't say anything.
Six: It's damn, not dawm.
Thank you for listening to the constructive critisism.
| SilentTears2662 chapter 1 . 12/3/2010
Aww that was sweet.