Reviews for The greatest gift of all
woodlandfairykirk chapter 1 . 8/11/2012
awwww! it was adorable!
Omega Collaborative chapter 1 . 2/11/2011
Good one, I could just picture thos four sitting on a couch and Temari Elbowing Kankuro HARD for say that. still LOL its all good. "thank you sssoooo much Temari."
Fired Feathers of a Pheonix chapter 1 . 1/12/2011
Good plot and nice fluff, but there are some things you should fix.

One: it does not snow in Sunagakure. It's a desert.

Two: When you use quotations, be sure to put some sort of period somewhere. It looks kids of stupid when you do this: "You'll see" he smiled. it should be "You'll see." He smiled. It just looks more professional.

Three: Temari does not say 'sweetheart.'

Four: It's Kankuro, not Konkoru.

Five: Don't do this: "..." It lookes stupid. Just say they didn't say anything.

Six: It's damn, not dawm.

Thank you for listening to the constructive critisism.

XxGaaraXRukixX
SilentTears2662 chapter 1 . 12/3/2010
Aww that was sweet.