Reviews for Most Precious Possession
hermonine chapter 11 . 9/28/2015
Great story :)
REDWOLF47 chapter 11 . 9/16/2015
This is so good.
brokentragedy2 chapter 11 . 9/12/2015
The plot has potential... The characters are tremendously OOC, which is fine I guess ( it's your story, therefore the personalities of the characters are what you would like them to be). It's a bit bothersome.

If you work on your writing the story would be so much better.
One thing you could work on most definitely is the babble!
Too much babbling going, its distracting. I can literally skip 2 whole paragraphs just to get to the point.

I believe your intention is to describe, which is essential; But do try to find a balance in between.
I hope you don't take this criticism in a negative way.
Dinc chapter 11 . 8/16/2015
Please continue! It's very good!
Chris chapter 8 . 8/9/2015
SOoo disappointed you have not finished this fanfic it had real potential.
Very upset fan has been waiting forever and checking this to see when you would complete the fic.
Amaya Rosanguard chapter 11 . 3/23/2015
I almost got down on my knees dramatically, tore my shirt open and scream 'NNNNOOOO!'
I hope you get back to writing this and I can't wait to see a new chapter of this fan fiction come out.
Ahryielle chapter 11 . 12/30/2014
I just read this note on your other story... *pout*
wolfkitty1103 chapter 10 . 11/8/2014
This story is so good! I do hope that stubborn writers block goes away soon!
Princess of Mirkwood2 chapter 10 . 10/26/2014
Love it write more soon please.
Bloody Amethyst chapter 11 . 10/16/2014
I soooooo want to read more of this story :-D
This story is REALLY good :-D

Please update this one soon :-D
sesshyayame the best chapter 11 . 10/10/2014
congratulations lady! nice stories
thebookworm90 chapter 11 . 7/8/2014
So...how did the pregnancy go? Did you have a boy or a girl? Will you ever update again?
Angels Falls8 chapter 11 . 2/1/2014
I love this story... are you going to start updating it soon?
VanillaDreamFran chapter 11 . 12/1/2013
This story is awesomely awesome! I look forward very much so to the next chapter and to kagome and Sessy's growing relationship :)
Awaiting update chapter 11 . 11/26/2013
Come on dream catcher give your fans a Christmas of at least a chapter to this fantastic story.
We are still awaiting your return to this. Its got real potential and something different to other
pieces of fan fiction I've read.

Firestar.
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