Reviews for Most Precious Possession
cconnor042 chapter 11 . 5/31
i hope i will be able to read more chapters in the future
Kaze chapter 5 . 5/24
I love the story please continue it
RedPandaMiko chapter 11 . 5/8
please oh please update
afeltyz chapter 11 . 3/13
*prod* *prod*
Please update
o0-SilverMoon-0o chapter 11 . 12/27/2016
This is really good! Please update soon!

Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!
EdhelwenOnieta chapter 11 . 10/29/2016
Will you be finishing this story?! I want more!
Tai chapter 11 . 9/29/2016
I continue to love this story. I hope everything is going well and we will see you back on FF soon!
hermonine chapter 11 . 9/28/2015
Great story :)
REDWOLF47 chapter 11 . 9/16/2015
This is so good.
brokentragedy2 chapter 11 . 9/12/2015
The plot has potential... The characters are tremendously OOC, which is fine I guess ( it's your story, therefore the personalities of the characters are what you would like them to be). It's a bit bothersome.

If you work on your writing the story would be so much better.
One thing you could work on most definitely is the babble!
Too much babbling going, its distracting. I can literally skip 2 whole paragraphs just to get to the point.

I believe your intention is to describe, which is essential; But do try to find a balance in between.
I hope you don't take this criticism in a negative way.
Dinc chapter 11 . 8/16/2015
Please continue! It's very good!
Chris chapter 8 . 8/9/2015
SOoo disappointed you have not finished this fanfic it had real potential.
Very upset fan has been waiting forever and checking this to see when you would complete the fic.
Amaya Rosanguard chapter 11 . 3/23/2015
I almost got down on my knees dramatically, tore my shirt open and scream 'NNNNOOOO!'
I hope you get back to writing this and I can't wait to see a new chapter of this fan fiction come out.
Ahryielle chapter 11 . 12/30/2014
I just read this note on your other story... *pout*
wolfkitty1103 chapter 10 . 11/8/2014
This story is so good! I do hope that stubborn writers block goes away soon!
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