I still miss this story. Holding out hope for an update.

Wow, this story is amazing, sorry that it isn't finished... Anyway you are an amazing writer! Thank you for sharing

Goddamnit. Goddamnit, goddamnit, goddamnit!

I just found this story and see I’m almost a decade too late. Fuck. I NEED to know how this resolves and I have a funny feeling no one will even see this review, let alone update the story.

Shit. Ass. Rat. Fuck.

If it is ever completed, I beg you to alert me!

I fell in love with this story and the characters you created. I'm in awe with your talent. Hope you will continue this 3

I love everything about this beauty of a story! These characters strike just the right 'take on the world' with just the right teen bravado, and seem to have the skills, and so far, the smarts to keep going. How anyone understands one-word Alice is interesting. Each of the young ladies have their own special skill set. While the boys are ballsy and hot and unpredictable in a not so classic bad boy way. Ever so wish you would add to the story. I'm thinking for the end, they had half a mind to go out blazing, but I'd like to think they'd come out better. Maybe they'll take down the mob and get put into witness protection? Big cash win and Mexico? Emmett and Rose reappear somehow? Charlie makes a grab for Bella? Some prison time? Alice needs to stay out of organized institutions. Wish I knew! Hope you are healthy and well, thanks for sharing your talents!

Hi there! I keep coming back to reread this and I hope you’ll finish it! It’s so good and I’m excited to see where you’ll take the story Thank you!

I love this

This is so cool so far haha

This is such a brilliant fic! Great characters, brilliant storyline, I have enjoyed it so much and it will be like a n unexpectedly fabulous Christmas present if you do another chapter. Thankyou x

Wow it’s been a long time since I read a good thrilling fic. Too bad it’s not finished. But thanks anyway for writing and sharing this

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!

There's no more? Ohhhhhhhhh! NFW! This hasn't been updated for almost 6 years? AWWWW Hell NO!

Come back yalls! I need to know what happens next! OMFG!

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Ugh, love your writing.
Wish you guys still write but hope all is well!

I really like where this story was going, so much invested in it. Well, if you decide to update, I will be mightily interested in how Alice gets help and how E and B make out. Seems like you were going to pull them out couple at a time. But, I dunno. I hope you are well and find time to get back to writing.

I really really wish you gals could add to this story! It is so brilliant!