It's worse to me that the room smelled like cheese and eggs than hooker. And hooker is bad enough. I can't! (yes, I was laughing!)

Can't wait to see what happens with these accidental outlaws.

Love it! Love the talk Bella and Edward had.

"Okay… it appears that we're some kind of unarmed gas station robbery ring,"

"Well," Edward said, pulling on his hot pink sunglasses. "Let's go see about showers and hourly rate motels."

This is some hilarious Sh-Stuff!

Edward and his "Let me"

She has no chance! Poor baby.

lol, what is up with "Alice"?

Awesome!

I start the chapter with Bradley's voice, and end it the same. :)

I love these guys and all their personalities. So much smiling happening. And every time Bella says "frick"? Smile. :) haha

Saw this rec'd at Edwardville.

I caught that breakfast club quote NICE.

thanks for the double updates! kinda made my day

kudos!

Love it!

This seems like a real downhill slide for sure: Alice bottoming out; Bella feeling hopeless; Edward & Jasper fighting, making up, but while acting together- mentally they are divided.

jansails/jan2

This chapter was so freaking good! Seriously, from the stupid argument, to the boy brawl is was perfect. I'm really worried about Alice, I can't wait to see what the hell these kids are going to get into next. Thanks for the update!

can't wait for more

OMG it gets better and better. You two and your magic touch. This chap is phenomenal. I love Bella's perpetual freak outs and how Edward pulls her back in. The silly convo at the beginning to his "I love you, you know" SWOONYTOWN

Jasper and Edward fighting and Bella biting him. Lol.

Poor Alice. I'm really worried about her. So sad. Jaspers desperation. Sigh.

My nerves are all jumbled up over this card game. But Edwards attitude always makes me feel better. He makes me feel safe.

Thanksya for the additional update! So happy. XO

Oh, thanks for a new chapter so soon! This chapter was pretty intense with the fighting and Alice deteriorating. They need to get some help for her right away. Hope there is no trouble at the card game. I'm kind of nervous about everything. And looking forward to the next chapter.

This is insanity! both the two chaps in a weekend and the actual going ons of the story. too much! I'm so excited.

OMG! I am so nervous. I can't wait for more ;)