Aww, man, she lost the cussing bet right there at the end of the chapter with saying ass. Kinda reminds me of just yesterday when my little one insisted that she'd kicked the police officer's ass if he tried to arrest me because she didn't feel like being strapped into her car seat. She's four. I soooo had to hold in my laughter.

Anyway, I really like this alot. It's fun and entertaining and sure to be hella awesome considering it's the two of you who are doing the writing.

Now, just a quick question (won't make a difference either way), it wasn't specified so I was just wondering if this is really going to be a story about the six of them, or will it focus on mainly Edward and Bella, because obviously the first chapter lends to the belief that it's more centered around those two. Like I said, it doesn't really matter because I know that either way this will be awesome, I was just curious.

Anyway, great start and I really look forward to reading more of it!

I luv it so far, u guys always write good stories but I just hope it's not angsty, u guys do good angst but I need happy, but either way i'm excited for a new story so please update soon!

yaaaay! I'm already in love.

Emmett's logic as far as why it's perfectly okay to rob the gas station slays me :) and the dialogue and details are great!

I'm really excited to see where this goes!

I always love the stuff you guys cook up and I'm sure this will be fantastic. I enjoyed the beginning. Looking forward to more.

Ohhh I think I deffinetly like this yup :) can't wait for an update I love asshole edwards and snarky bellas :)

Ohhh I think I deffinetly like this yup :) can't wait for an update I love asshole edwards and snarky bellas :)

Love this already, finally Bella standing up for herself and I love that she's with the boys- gotta love 'em! Can't wait to see how this story pans out : ) Update soon!

Lovin this so far!

*clears throat*

*starts to sing loudly, badly but very happily. . . *

"They were bound for glory

Bound for living on the edge

They were bound for each other

Like two comets heading for a bed."

Ah but my world is a good ole place again with you and the Divine Ms J cohabiting in my fanfic world.

You and she give hella good story.

Muchos on the Grazias for the share xx

seriously intruiged. i love it. i love how you and jandco manage to communicate the characters and the history and their personalities in one chapter w/o being,

"Hello. I am Bella Swan. I am _ yrs old and I think I'm a plain Jane. Holy shit, look at Edward's bronze hair and those green ORBS of emerald."

that's refreshing and wonderful.

thankyou for sharing with us, this was my christmas wish (for another jandco and wtvoc collab - i stated it in an ADF campfire lol)and I'm super excited.

you're amazing,.

Connie

Sign me up for this ride!

Can't wait for an update. Some pretty great humor to this story I hope.