|Reviews for Dirty Little Secret|
| my 2 guys chapter 1 . 5/30/2011
that was good keep it up
| anon chapter 1 . 12/17/2010
Awesome interpretation of that scene. Well written!
| merlot46 chapter 1 . 12/6/2010
I really like this story, thought it was very true to character. And I LOVE the Poe song choice- I think it the most perfect Damon-Elena song out there and I've never seen anyone use it before! A lot of her songs are great for them actually (like Amazed), but Wild is just perfect. Only complaint is you should have put more of the lyrics!
More verses that I think suit them:
Tell me what you've come for
Moving like a hunter through my back door
Leaving the perfume of all you adore
To die nameless on my floor
Yeah well we both know you don't play fair
I guess you really think that you get me there
Let's be honest perhaps this little ride
is too much for even you to bear
You've got a lot of nerve to come back here
You're not the only one who can smell fear
| Kazz8170 chapter 1 . 12/3/2010
AMAZING! If I had a 'thud' smiley I would be using it!
| novashanti chapter 1 . 12/3/2010
| A chapter 1 . 12/3/2010
Very Nice, it complements the scene very well.
| havenhoya chapter 1 . 12/3/2010
Perfect characterization of this scene! Love your stories. I know that you have limited time but please keep writing in this fandom. I finally signed up on fanfiction (I really hate posting online) so that I could leave a review in the hopes of encouraging you to do just that. It can be difficult to find well-written stories about the Damon/Elena pairing so I really appreciate your talent!
| 11nivea342 chapter 1 . 12/3/2010
I loveee that line about one day shell die with life written on her face and hands. Beautiful!
| darkestdesire8 chapter 1 . 12/3/2010
Oh wow, written to perfection, love it. :)
| hopelessromantic549 chapter 1 . 12/3/2010
But he liked the fire she possessed, the steel core hidden by her soft curves, sweet smiles, and old-soul eyes the color of lovingly aged whiskey.
i'm so in love with this line.
and with this story!
| Deleted100200300 chapter 1 . 12/3/2010
I loved every single word!
| TwilightElena chapter 1 . 12/3/2010
oh yes! I was thinking something along the lines of this when I saw that part on the show! I was hoping someone would write it out!
Please post more super super soon!
| Ghostwriter chapter 1 . 12/3/2010
| BadBoysAreBest chapter 1 . 12/3/2010
"or to keep her with him for all of eternity"
yay. Very cute tag, much appreciated.
| dutchtreat chapter 1 . 12/3/2010
I loved this! There was so much sexual tension in that scene, and Elena can deny all she wants, but it must have turned her on ... and of course Damon picked up on that ;)