Reviews for Dirty Little Secret
Dbzgirl1011 chapter 1 . 4/4/2014
I'm sorry that was funny...
Lol damon.. And oooh elenaa
my 2 guys chapter 1 . 5/30/2011
that was good keep it up
anon chapter 1 . 12/17/2010
Awesome interpretation of that scene. Well written!
merlot46 chapter 1 . 12/6/2010
I really like this story, thought it was very true to character. And I LOVE the Poe song choice- I think it the most perfect Damon-Elena song out there and I've never seen anyone use it before! A lot of her songs are great for them actually (like Amazed), but Wild is just perfect. Only complaint is you should have put more of the lyrics!

More verses that I think suit them:

Tell me what you've come for

Moving like a hunter through my back door

Leaving the perfume of all you adore

To die nameless on my floor

Yeah well we both know you don't play fair

I guess you really think that you get me there

Let's be honest perhaps this little ride

is too much for even you to bear

You've got a lot of nerve to come back here

You're not the only one who can smell fear
Kazz8170 chapter 1 . 12/3/2010
AMAZING! If I had a 'thud' smiley I would be using it!
novashanti chapter 1 . 12/3/2010
Nice work!
A chapter 1 . 12/3/2010
Very Nice, it complements the scene very well.
havenhoya chapter 1 . 12/3/2010
Perfect characterization of this scene! Love your stories. I know that you have limited time but please keep writing in this fandom. I finally signed up on fanfiction (I really hate posting online) so that I could leave a review in the hopes of encouraging you to do just that. It can be difficult to find well-written stories about the Damon/Elena pairing so I really appreciate your talent!
11nivea342 chapter 1 . 12/3/2010
I loveee that line about one day shell die with life written on her face and hands. Beautiful!
darkestdesire8 chapter 1 . 12/3/2010
Oh wow, written to perfection, love it. :)
hopelessromantic549 chapter 1 . 12/3/2010
But he liked the fire she possessed, the steel core hidden by her soft curves, sweet smiles, and old-soul eyes the color of lovingly aged whiskey.

i'm so in love with this line.

and with this story!
Deleted100200300 chapter 1 . 12/3/2010
I loved every single word!
TwilightElena chapter 1 . 12/3/2010
oh yes! I was thinking something along the lines of this when I saw that part on the show! I was hoping someone would write it out!

Please post more super super soon!
Ghostwriter chapter 1 . 12/3/2010
Nicely done.
BadBoysAreBest chapter 1 . 12/3/2010
"or to keep her with him for all of eternity"

yay. Very cute tag, much appreciated.
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