|Reviews for Underneath the Surface|
| cloudshape to ennien chapter 1 . 2/7
I don't know what to say. You capture these characters in such a way it is almost scary. You don't just SHOW how they feel, but make your readers FEEL how they feel.
Your stories are the most amazing Dexter stories I have read, probably the most amazing out there. And at least as good as the actual show if not better.
And now I am all angry and sad again at Lumen for leaving Dexter. Or rather at the writers for writing her that way. And I am so grateful to you for not writing about Hanna and Dexter as I can't stand her. Or Lila. Lumen was just perfect - if she hadn't left.
| Shannon Makayla Smith chapter 1 . 9/15/2014
This makes me so happy. I just finished "In the beginning" and my OTP is Dexter/Lumen. But I know she leaves DX But this fic made my day.
| illusion95 chapter 1 . 1/8/2014
Beautiful. I love dex/lumen
| Shrike176 chapter 1 . 12/16/2010
Good story, I like the way Dexter and Lumen are able to share all the aspects of Dexter's life. Not sure if you plan on continuing this, it seems to work well as both a one shot or the start of a longer story.
| Shazzam27 chapter 1 . 12/5/2010
That was really adorable _ faved
| Paula chapter 1 . 12/5/2010
Great job )
| lynn422 chapter 1 . 12/4/2010
Great chapter. :)
| Haylis chapter 1 . 12/4/2010
Yay! First Lumen fic. Me very happy. And it's even a very good one. Love it! :)
| SGBS4L chapter 1 . 12/3/2010
Thank you for that well written story. I was dying for some season 5 fanfiction