|Reviews for What Ifs and Plot Holes|
| Guest chapter 16 . 7/10/2014
Ahem. One of the things that drives me nuts on (or anywhere else, to be honest) is the number of people who think that human women are most fertile just before their menstrual cycle. They aren't. In fact, that is the time they are least fertile. Those who eschew contraceptives and who must truly avoid pregnancy for whatever reason use *that* time to be intimate. If you want to go by the average woman, she would be *most* fertile about day 14 of her cycle. I forget exactly how to calculate how long her fertility lasts after ovulation, but it's a few days. (A related, but not here relevant, issue is the fact that although a woman's eggs are only available for a day or so each, sperm can hang around for up to a week. Therefore, a woman can get pregnant even she does not have coitus on the day she ovulates despite what some writers think. My first child was conceived on the day I ovulated - five days *after* coitus.)
And don't get me started on the way childbirth is portrayed!
| Taromaru chapter 15 . 12/18/2013
Wow, I never really noticed the similarities between Inuyasha and Ichigo until I actually thought about it. They're both impetuous, rebellious, stubborn, violent, short-tempered, protective, put on a "bad boy" facade to hide their true feelings and, of course, they're both half-breeds with human mothers and supernatural fathers. Hell, even their relationships with Kagome and Rukia (as well as Sesshomaru and Byakuya)are alike.
I wonder if that's not liberate. Kubo *is* a professed Inuyasha fan, after all.
| Taraah36 chapter 18 . 8/15/2013
Wow... So much hurt. Yet the love and happiness it brought could overcome anything.
Poor Rin, I know Sessh was damn near out of his mind died.
You know, I think its time the fates graced him with a mate.
Someone similar to Rin, but a demon. Someone who won't leave him as well :-)
He needs someone strong but sweet just like her :-)
| Taraah36 chapter 17 . 8/15/2013
I love it! I'm so glad your back!
For a minute I thought Ayame was missing, but there she is in the background :-)
There is one being missing... Although I don't think she starts around until Kagome's time.
That would be
Mother Inu. :-)
| Nocturna Mae chapter 18 . 8/11/2013
This last one was beautiful. I love the way you wove in the tale of Inuyasha and Kagome's happy life together, but with the bittersweetness of those who miss them, and the way her family had been hoping that they might survive long enough to see them again. And the touch of giving Sesshoumaru a family again was nice.
| SaviorEmmaJones chapter 18 . 8/10/2013
Wow...that was beautiful. I was almost in tears. Well done!
| SaviorEmmaJones chapter 17 . 8/10/2013
Ha ha ha! Inuyasha has grown wise over the uears! Great chapter!
| xxdarienchibaloverxx chapter 18 . 8/10/2013
Ahhhhh y must u make me cry T-T I was crying this whole story! You wrote it beautifully! Poor Sesshoumaru :'( I'm incredibly empathetic with characters and I could feel the pain he felt with all the deaths of the ones that had been close to him. Love the story and I look forward to your other stories!
| Sycocat2 chapter 13 . 8/7/2013
| SilverontheRose chapter 18 . 8/7/2013
Oh, rats. You made me cry before I even got really awake. Loved it. Another exceptionally told tale.
| Esha Napoleon chapter 18 . 8/6/2013
Simply beautiful 3
| Sycocat2 chapter 9 . 8/6/2013
My sister yelled at me for laughing so much. This was such an enjoyable read. I love all of these :D
| Sycocat2 chapter 8 . 8/6/2013
Oh I love this one so much! I'm smiling and teary-eyed. This seems just like Sesshomaru. It's so sweet, she really is his baby.
| Sycocat2 chapter 2 . 8/6/2013
I couldn't stop smiling while reading this :) I can truly imagine them ending up like this. Nicely written.
| Sycocat2 chapter 1 . 8/6/2013
Aw :) Silly and cute