|Reviews for The Road Home|
| Davewik chapter 2 . 5/19/2012
It's a shame to see such a well written fic abandoned. People are still playing the game as you can pick it up so cheap, and are still into Enslaved as a universe so there is no reason to stop writing fic! It would be great to see an update...
| onkei chapter 2 . 4/7/2012
This is so well-written! You did a really good job getting into these characters, I felt like it was actually apart of the original story. Good job!
| gggggggggg chapter 2 . 11/24/2011
are you gonna update? please? pretty please? I love your story, and since we're not getting an enslaved 2 game, our only way to make a living is fanfictions! and yours is the best one I found so far! I can really picture in my head everything you write as if it really was the sequel...
| Princess Auna chapter 2 . 9/5/2011
:[[[ i was so into this until i saw there was no more chapters xD then i was sad :s!
ll i love the story. update soon ;o? :]
| Kelliente chapter 2 . 8/24/2011
You are an evil, evil person to start this fic, write it so well, and then never finish it. Evil! :)
| T2 Angel chapter 2 . 6/28/2011
Very cool. Can't wait for the rest.
| SkItZoFrEaK chapter 2 . 6/20/2011
I hope you didn't drop this story - I'm really enjoying it. I like your characterization of Monkey's thought process. You don't use overly-flowery imagery or long, pretentious words to describe his opinions or observations. You write a Monkey I recognize from the game - simple, straight forward, and once he gets over his initial anger at things, he takes even bad situations in stride. Your portrayal of his conflicted feelings about the headband are particularly interesting and realistic. I'd like to see what they do next in your story, and what happens in a post-Pyramid world.
| AlmAKaTVampirO chapter 2 . 5/29/2011
Great! I look forward to later chapters. Your writing is very good. Your imagery is very good. I like it :)
| Pookyilicous chapter 2 . 5/27/2011
brilliant I would like more please :D
| Pen E Forthotz chapter 2 . 5/6/2011
Would love to see this continued! This game has very little quality fanfics and this one definitely shows promise!
| Lady Lyndis chapter 2 . 4/18/2011
Love love love this! Just like everybody else has said, Trip and Monkey are in character and everything is so much in the spirit of the game. I love your writing style too; not too much detail and not too little - just the right amount! Please please write more! I've never put so many exclamation points in a review before! :)
| Qwoppop chapter 2 . 3/14/2011
ooh this is very interesting to read! i look forward to the next chapter! D
| mythstoorfoot chapter 2 . 2/11/2011
Gah! I love this so much! Your dialogue is absolutely wonderful and in-character - I can perfectly imagine Monkey and Trip saying all of this.
"…I go where you go." AAHHHH so adorable! xD It's wonderful how subtle you made this, with little moments like "Could be she knew." It's so great because it keeps with the spirit of the game.
I loved how Monkey was uncertain about the headband. That seems natural, seeing as it's symbolic for the connection between him and Trip.
You MUST continue this! I can't wait to see what happens to them in the village! :)
| Jelfia Maleak chapter 2 . 2/3/2011
like to see where you are going with this. nice start.
| archchic chapter 2 . 1/20/2011
Great story! Really enjoy your depiction of Trip and Monkey, they sound completely true to character, and the events after the end of the game are also completely realistic. Love it! Also love the fluffy bits too, the hints of romance... :D Please continue!