|Reviews for 22 years later|
| JohnWill chapter 8 . 9/27/2014
My imagination is going so crazy that the text is turning into manga panels #-# Exciting!
| John Will chapter 5 . 9/23/2014
Okay I just joined and I'll be straight to the point about this. The reason I'm posting this here is because the site won't let me PM until tomorrow, but I'm impatient. ANYWAY, I want your permission to draw this as a manga. Bakuman is my favorite story of all time, I haven't been so excited reading something since Bakuman, and now this fanfic has got me riled up again. But back to the main point, I really want to illustrate this as a manga, so if you are fine with me doing so please let me know. My email is
I await your response.
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/22/2014
OMG! This is awesome, I haven't been this excited since Bakuman ended! :D I can't wait to read all of this!
| MetroNeko chapter 20 . 7/31/2013
This was such a wonderful story! It was very closely linked with the manga plot and the fact that Ichigo and Yume got a popular anime is a little unbelievable but you did a wonderful job with this story. I've always admired this mangaka because Bakuman was so different so realistic...in its own revealed the truth of being a mangaka to many young aspiring people. I've even talked to someone who's actually working towards becoming a mangaka after reading it and they're actually pretty good! Writing in another style is incredibly difficult and what you've done with this story is amazing. You've got places where you could have improved but I look forward to read more of your work...I wonder what a normal story by you is like... XD I adored Takuya.
| MetroNeko chapter 8 . 7/31/2013
... okay its official, I like Takuya, the guy's hilarious!
| MetroNeko chapter 2 . 7/31/2013
1)-_- geez you made me go and double check if one piece was finished.
2)... and the irony is that her father was actually a good liar.
I'm gonna enjoy reading this.
| PiWrite chapter 8 . 5/6/2013
Uhm I don't think that Ichigo and Yume can become the new Ashirogi Muto if Ashirogi Muto is still working ;u;
| PiWrite chapter 2 . 5/6/2013
Those gorgeous children.
PS those kids are silly. Genetics has nothing to do with what genres people can write/draw. Haha it was already proved in the actual series /laughs
| Hikari Evans chapter 20 . 2/17/2013
Aaaaaw ;_; I'm so weak for happy endings ;_; It was beautiful ;_;
First, I just can't hate Kouji ;_; He is a victim too... I'm glad his mom is taking care of him ;_; Maybe he could feel better someday ;_; Nothing is better tran a mom
And well, the main pairing *-* They're so cute! I cried with yume's words about Takuya ;_; and how his love made her more confident ;_; It makes me want a love like this xDDD
And Akira and his proposal! hahaha yeah, they will never be normal xD
I enjoyed the scene between Iwase and Niizuma too :)
It was an amazing story! Really touching! Thank you for writing :)
| NewSlove chapter 20 . 2/13/2013
lol i don't like you for ending the story! it's a good chapter and in a way i'm glad no one died...but either way whyyyyyy lol. oh well. i look forward to your next work!
| Souji Vizard chapter 20 . 2/13/2013
Wow, I was expecting this awesome story to last a little longer, but after I read this last chapter I convinced myself that this was the perfect end. It really was, and I loved it!
Thank you so much for writing such a tender, deep, dinamic, and thrilling story, it was a pleasure for me to read it. I loved the plot that you created and all the lovely characters, they each had they own personality and... awwww, I just loved Takuya! :3 Hahahah.
The happy ending was just perfect, it worth the waiting. Similar to the Bakuman's ending, and I wouldn't have expected less (also, naming the last chapter 'Dreams and Reality' as in the manga was a nice detail) :D
Again, thank you very much for sharing this story that I enjoyed a lot. I hope to read another story by you, I'm sure it'll be as good as this one, or even better!
| Tachi Tsuki un chapter 20 . 2/13/2013
:'D awwwwww Happy Ending!
| MadameRedx chapter 19 . 11/27/2012
AHHH OH MY GOSH. This isseriously a really good chapter. I love how Nizuma tries to protect Mahiro (but gets beat up anyway XD BUT IT WAS CUTE). Also, FINALLY. Kouji shiws his true colours, and Mahiro says the words I've been waiting for. But seriously Takuya is so adorkable man, I love him too much. I'm excited for whats gonna happen next; will Takuya come to the rescue, or will something happen and more obstacles are thrown in? (:
Great update, looking forward to your next c:
| Souji Vizard chapter 19 . 11/24/2012
Wow! That was indeed an awesome chapter. I was really surprised about the fight in the restroom, i had imagined Akira as a bully and I didn't expect him to be beaten up so easily. I hope Takuya to appear just in time like a hero to save Yume. Ah! And you owe me a chocolate cake hahahahha. Don't worry, upload a new chapter without pression, I'll wait! :D
| Tachi Tsuki un chapter 19 . 11/22/2012
:O omg. He's crazy!