|Reviews for 22 years later|
| MetroNeko chapter 20 . 7/31/2013
This was such a wonderful story! It was very closely linked with the manga plot and the fact that Ichigo and Yume got a popular anime is a little unbelievable but you did a wonderful job with this story. I've always admired this mangaka because Bakuman was so different so realistic...in its own revealed the truth of being a mangaka to many young aspiring people. I've even talked to someone who's actually working towards becoming a mangaka after reading it and they're actually pretty good! Writing in another style is incredibly difficult and what you've done with this story is amazing. You've got places where you could have improved but I look forward to read more of your work...I wonder what a normal story by you is like... XD I adored Takuya.
| MetroNeko chapter 8 . 7/31/2013
... okay its official, I like Takuya, the guy's hilarious!
| MetroNeko chapter 2 . 7/31/2013
1)-_- geez you made me go and double check if one piece was finished.
2)... and the irony is that her father was actually a good liar.
I'm gonna enjoy reading this.
| PiWrite chapter 8 . 5/6/2013
Uhm I don't think that Ichigo and Yume can become the new Ashirogi Muto if Ashirogi Muto is still working ;u;
| PiWrite chapter 2 . 5/6/2013
Those gorgeous children.
PS those kids are silly. Genetics has nothing to do with what genres people can write/draw. Haha it was already proved in the actual series /laughs
| Hikari Evans chapter 20 . 2/17/2013
Aaaaaw ;_; I'm so weak for happy endings ;_; It was beautiful ;_;
First, I just can't hate Kouji ;_; He is a victim too... I'm glad his mom is taking care of him ;_; Maybe he could feel better someday ;_; Nothing is better tran a mom
And well, the main pairing *-* They're so cute! I cried with yume's words about Takuya ;_; and how his love made her more confident ;_; It makes me want a love like this xDDD
And Akira and his proposal! hahaha yeah, they will never be normal xD
I enjoyed the scene between Iwase and Niizuma too :)
It was an amazing story! Really touching! Thank you for writing :)
| NewSlove chapter 20 . 2/13/2013
lol i don't like you for ending the story! it's a good chapter and in a way i'm glad no one died...but either way whyyyyyy lol. oh well. i look forward to your next work!
| Souji Vizard chapter 20 . 2/13/2013
Wow, I was expecting this awesome story to last a little longer, but after I read this last chapter I convinced myself that this was the perfect end. It really was, and I loved it!
Thank you so much for writing such a tender, deep, dinamic, and thrilling story, it was a pleasure for me to read it. I loved the plot that you created and all the lovely characters, they each had they own personality and... awwww, I just loved Takuya! :3 Hahahah.
The happy ending was just perfect, it worth the waiting. Similar to the Bakuman's ending, and I wouldn't have expected less (also, naming the last chapter 'Dreams and Reality' as in the manga was a nice detail) :D
Again, thank you very much for sharing this story that I enjoyed a lot. I hope to read another story by you, I'm sure it'll be as good as this one, or even better!
| Tachi Tsuki un chapter 20 . 2/13/2013
:'D awwwwww Happy Ending!
| MadameRedx chapter 19 . 11/27/2012
AHHH OH MY GOSH. This isseriously a really good chapter. I love how Nizuma tries to protect Mahiro (but gets beat up anyway XD BUT IT WAS CUTE). Also, FINALLY. Kouji shiws his true colours, and Mahiro says the words I've been waiting for. But seriously Takuya is so adorkable man, I love him too much. I'm excited for whats gonna happen next; will Takuya come to the rescue, or will something happen and more obstacles are thrown in? (:
Great update, looking forward to your next c:
| Souji Vizard chapter 19 . 11/24/2012
Wow! That was indeed an awesome chapter. I was really surprised about the fight in the restroom, i had imagined Akira as a bully and I didn't expect him to be beaten up so easily. I hope Takuya to appear just in time like a hero to save Yume. Ah! And you owe me a chocolate cake hahahahha. Don't worry, upload a new chapter without pression, I'll wait! :D
| Tachi Tsuki un chapter 19 . 11/22/2012
:O omg. He's crazy!
| Souji Vizard chapter 18 . 9/17/2012
These two last chapters were excellent, I really feel that the story is in its climax and is great how everything is developening so far, I mean, is not predictable what's going to happen in the end (about Yume) and that is what I like most about stories. About predictable, I knew that Ichigo and Akira would end up together but their scenes where so nice and I hope to read something about their marriage and how their parents will react! :)
Kouji is a very complicated character, this last chapter was very sad. But I'm still in Takuya team! Hahaha.
Keep writing as good as you're writing now and see you in another chapter :D
| Hikari Evans chapter 18 . 9/15/2012
Woah! I'm scared! Yume is in danger x.x But Kouji is a victim :( I really hope he can be happy one day :)
| Hikari Evans chapter 17 . 9/11/2012
I'm so happy! Akira and Ichigo are together now! It's wonderful 3 They love each other since they were little!
Wow! Takuya has to try to do something! His heroine is in danger!I love how Yume is starting to love him back!
Great job! I love it